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We met him while scavenging off one of his kills. We were starving… not that we had ever been good hunters, but this winter was particularly hard. We couldn’t find anything to eat, we couldn’t catch anything… his kill was all we had eaten that week… so we followed him. He wasn’t happy at first, and tried to chase us off a couple of times, but we couldn’t give in, and in the end I think he just accepted it. It was so cold no one wanted to argue, and I’m sure at least, he was grateful for the extra body warmth. So that’s how it was, I’m not sure how long for, he walked on and we followed. I didn’t know his name then; he rarely spoke to us so we didn’t speak either. It was cold, and silent, and lonely, but we were alive and he was our lifeline.He was a stranger there like we were, he must have been because he had no territory or place to sleep. Aik thought he was looking for someone, but whatever it was, and wherever he was going… we followed. On that particular day we were walking across a mountain plain, a blizzard had sprung up from nowhere, yet he refused to stop. It was hard to see anything; everything was completely white except for the vaguest of shapes. We were struggling to keep up with him then, but we couldn’t stop and were frightened we’d lose him completely. So we kept shouting at each other to keep going, to not give up and to move faster. We were so concerned with that that we didn’t see the crevasse in front of use. The snow had almost completely covered it over but Aik must have stepped on it because the snow gave way and she disappeared instantly. It all happened so quickly I didn’t know what had happened. I ran to the hole, screaming her name, almost falling in, in the process. It was so dark in there that, for an instant, I couldn’t see her at all. Then I did, somehow she must have grabbed one of the roots hanging down as she fell, because she was dangling there. She looked up at me, her eyes filled with fear, and I realised she ok. Luckily, the root she had grabbed hung down from the tree near me and I could just about reach it. Gripping it gently in my teeth, I pulled with all my strength, trying to pull her up.. but I couldn’t. I tried again and again, but I just wasn’t strong enough, there was nothing I could do. Finally I let go, exhausted, I didn’t look down, I couldn’t. I could still see her eyes pleading with me though. I knew she must be having the same thought I was. That sooner or later Aik would lose her grip and fall… and there was nothing I could do to save her. I looked away; I couldn’t see her face again, knowing that it would be the last time. The snow was beginning to clear a bit now, I could see more shapes then I could before, one of them was moving. I wasn’t the only one here! of course I wasn’t! …and he would surely be strong enough. I looked down at Aik again, as realisation dawned.
“I’m coming back.” I said to her and ran off towards the figure.
He hadn’t appeared have noticed we had gone and, when I caught up again, he didn’t look around to look at me. I stopped for a second, nervous, unsure... He had never made us feel welcome after all; would he really care enough to help? They were strangers after all, why would their problems concern him?
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Entry to =Antecanis ’s competition ‘Cold Times’ but I think it ended yesterday.
I had a lot of fun on this, I tried to make it look a little like screenshots from a film, not sure it’s worked entirely... and there are a few silly mistakes... but I don’t mind. Maybe I'll fix them later...
Yes the boxes aren’t evenly spaced, it looks better like this, trust me.
Hmm… I wonder how Coronia will get Blade to help… of course I have some ideas, but I’m not saying.
Aik (grey one) & Coronia (red one) ©
Blade (yellow one) and Image © Me, ElementalSpirits
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Comments: 63
ElementalSpirits In reply to ??? [2011-05-26 07:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm in the process of writting two comics at the moment, although they have both been on hiltus for a while.
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LieutenantRaven In reply to ElementalSpirits [2011-05-26 13:40:04 +0000 UTC]
thats so great love to read them !
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ElementalSpirits In reply to LieutenantRaven [2011-05-26 20:55:44 +0000 UTC]
some of the pages are in my gallery.
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herakushi [2009-03-07 19:32:38 +0000 UTC]
Gah. Plaese save her Blade...Don't leave Aik , she fall to ..the blackness................le gasp...gah. c'mon...please...
Epic drama..in a way...well to me it..is..in a way....wow. that is one cool way to meet with Blade..the pun wasn't intended btw..xD
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-10 15:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Blade: "Urrrm... No, let her die.." <¬.¬>
He's such a creule dog... xD
Thank you, yes it's a very cool way to meet him.. unless your Aik of course..
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-10 18:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Aik: ...??!!!??? (MEANIE!*sniff sniff*)
heheh lol. Thats your Blade...xDD
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-11 17:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that's him alright.. The scary thing is he's pretty much the guy (...dog) version of me. *hides*
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-12 17:20:56 +0000 UTC]
*hides* Wah! Don't EVER become a guy( dog)! We don't need to of them!! (and I think he might get jealous/ pissed...) * runs..* Oh and don't walk into any evil people...They might cange you into a guy( dog) too. *runs and hides* KEEP SAFE!!!xDD
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-13 17:59:37 +0000 UTC]
lol I'll try to keep away from evil people that might try to turn me into guy dogs. Being turned into a dog wouldn't be so bad.. but a guy!? *shuders* >D
At least I wouldn't have to do any work though...
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-14 20:27:39 +0000 UTC]
* shuders with you..*
YAY! No work!
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-17 08:57:45 +0000 UTC]
YEAH! It's awesome!
*is spotted by raondom musher*
Waiiiit! no! NUUUUUUUU....
*draged off*
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-17 18:47:20 +0000 UTC]
...* stands still* ....Oh noes....?
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-18 09:31:51 +0000 UTC]
*silence, except for some crickets and the sound of distant whipping*
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-19 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]
*still stands still* ..!! ( Oh noes, thats work?! )
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-20 21:08:47 +0000 UTC]
Yes... if you're the dog!
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-21 16:06:49 +0000 UTC]
...But i'm not...
What happens to foxes..? ( I DON'T WANT TO WORK!)
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ElementalSpirits In reply to herakushi [2009-03-21 16:57:20 +0000 UTC]
You get to play a game called 'fox hunting'.
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herakushi In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-21 17:47:46 +0000 UTC]
WAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Omosky [2009-03-02 03:51:43 +0000 UTC]
Lmbo.
Hm, can't wait for the next piece to come out. ^_^
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Omosky [2009-03-02 12:11:34 +0000 UTC]
lol you'll have to wait. I can only draw as fast as my lazyness allows.
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Omosky In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-03-03 01:00:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol. I know how that's like. >_<
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ElementalSpirits In reply to DeathNoteRyukWolf [2009-03-02 12:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, drawing fur like that is really fun! xD
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Omosky [2009-02-24 21:21:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh noes! One-word-comment-of-doom! We try to avoid those here Omosky.
Thanks. ^^
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Omosky In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-02-26 02:36:13 +0000 UTC]
Lol. But that's just how speechless I am about it! I can only get one word out.
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Omosky [2009-03-01 09:53:58 +0000 UTC]
lol, I could let you off with that, but I'm just too evil.
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Phantazmas In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-02-24 21:25:02 +0000 UTC]
no problemo. It was well deserved. =^-^=
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Weird0Freak [2009-02-24 21:24:17 +0000 UTC]
*For you to guess.
Honistly, I don't know what my hands type sometimes... >.<
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Weird0Freak [2009-02-24 21:22:55 +0000 UTC]
That's just you guess.
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iLupa [2009-02-22 20:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this looks amazing.
I bet it took a while to finish, hmm?
<333
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ElementalSpirits In reply to iLupa [2009-02-24 21:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.. *trys to work it out* about 2 weeks I guess, but there were lots of gaps inbetween.. so I'm not sure. xD
I went lazy on the shading and background to cut down the time though. ^^
Thank you.
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iLupa In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-02-24 21:30:27 +0000 UTC]
<33
If I could give you a cookie for how awesome this is, I would.
But I can't, so I hope you can enjoy this pixel one, instead:
x]
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ElementalSpirits In reply to iLupa [2009-02-24 21:43:33 +0000 UTC]
...well.. it's not a pony.. but then I don't know how one of those tastes, so ok.
*pixel eats pixel cookie*
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Antecanis [2009-02-22 18:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Woah, this is awesome! It's very well written and I like Coro being the narrator here & the story is interesting and I wonder if you could tell me your ideas how this is gonna continue? I don't know Blade well enough...
I think the perspective of the second image was a pain in the butt? It looks great but hard. How Aik's dangling there is very dynamic and Coro being all like "!!!" adds much to the scene & the way how Coro's fore legs grabbing the snow.. <3
I think I like the first image the best somehow. The way Blade lays there, head truned away while Coro and Aik snuggled together, looking at his back.. that's such a neat picture. Really.
Ah I'm sorry for this short comment but I can't find the right words and I'm afraid I'd repeat myself... But I hope you know that I LOVE this one! I so do!! Thank you very very much! It's always great to look at your picture.. especially at such ...
Thanks, dear!
Oh! And what about the textures for you comic pages by the way?
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ElementalSpirits In reply to Antecanis [2009-02-24 13:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I don't normally write from a first person persective, so it was hard for me. I'm glad you like it.
I think a lot of people have the same problem with Blade, I should do more pictures of him to show his personallity... The problem is I don't want to give away anything of the comic so I don't post them. xD Blade is stubbon and grumpy and often acts tough because well.. I think it's natural for most wild animals to try to hide weakness. He's also very confused about himself because he helps a human and tends to take that confusion out on others. He fears he's becoming a pet and hates himself for it. Inside though he's actually quite gental and kind, and doesn't fight if he can find of another option. He's very protective and loyal to friends and once he decides to trust someone he will do anything for them (I'm not sure if he's brave or fearless in that respect. xD). Here I think Blade would begin by saying no, since Aik and Coro aren't anything to him, but Coro would plead with him and make him change his mind. xD Coro could say something to the effect of Aik is like a sister to her (I'm not sure if you think of them as sisters) and that she's all she has. Maybe also that surely he must understand since he's going to such an effort to look for someone. Hmm but obviously better said then that. xD That would pull on his ol' heart strings since Derons are very family oriantated and he's actually going through a similar thing. -spolier- -spoiler-
Yes the perpective was definately a pain, but very fun. xD I don't think I've ever drawn an angle like that before so it was fun to try to make it work. xD I know I've said this before but I think Aik's paws were that hardest to draw for that. I wanted them like outstreched fingers.. or as close as dogies can get xD... but those three toes kept getting in my way. xDD
I think that was my favorite in the sketch but in the finished one I think it's the 3rd one. :/ Not sure why, probably because the backgrounds in the others didn't turn out how I wanted them... and sketches somehow feel more emotional. xD
Heh, you might think that's a short comment, but it's the longest one I've had in ages. xD I'm glad you love it, and be afraid to repeat yourself. I do it all the time.
Ah! I'm still waiting on Night to send me back the flats. She had finals when we last spoke so I didn't want to push if she had a load of revission and exams to do. I don't know how long they go on for, but it must have been a couple of weeks ago, so I'll send her another note about it. Sorry for not keeping you in the loop, I just keep losing track of time these days.
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knightspirit46 [2009-02-22 17:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Whoa!!! This is WAY better than my entry!! I think it just ended TODAY! You might win!
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ElementalSpirits In reply to knightspirit46 [2009-02-24 13:35:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes I realise that now. xD I thought she siad Saterday, not Sunday. Stupid brain.
Thank you *crosses fingers*
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knightspirit46 In reply to ElementalSpirits [2009-02-24 15:29:22 +0000 UTC]
Yourwelcome!! I love yours way better than mine.
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