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Published: 2006-09-24 23:53:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 3601; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 291
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Here's my final assignment from AnimationMentor's advanced acting class. I like how it came out, though I know there are some areas that could be worked on some more. I had to move on though, cause Short Film Preproduction class starts tomorow!As usual, all comments and crits are appreciated! Hit download to desktop to view.
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Comments: 34
Pterux [2009-02-12 01:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Matching lips with drawings is SO difficult. You did so wonderfully! This really has a very big Disney feel and I love it.
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elipse In reply to Pterux [2009-02-12 15:00:32 +0000 UTC]
Really? Thanks! I hope the rest of the work that I do will have the same Disney charm so they'll hire me back, lol.
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lista04 [2007-02-06 02:03:28 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed this piece As a fellow animator I know the time and energy that goes into a piece like this ^_^ I haven't posted any of my 3D animation on here yet...but I like to fav good ones when I come across them ^_^
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elipse In reply to lista04 [2007-02-07 05:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Hey there, thanks for taking a look at my shots! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^-^ I'll add you to my watch list and look forward to seeing some of your animation.
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teaselbone [2007-01-23 12:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Very nice animation! The actions seem very lively and fluid. There's a nice reaction the woman has too Cool beaaannnssss. I actually take a class in 3D at UMass and I believe we watched a demo reel of students work from that school. A lot of nice stuff!
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elipse In reply to teaselbone [2007-01-23 16:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! You're probably referring to the Student Showcase. They're putting together another one for the winter, so be on the look out.
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greendesire [2006-12-10 06:58:25 +0000 UTC]
yay another fellow AM student! Its been hard to find AM people on deviantart.
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elipse In reply to greendesire [2006-12-10 16:34:58 +0000 UTC]
Hey there. Which class are you in?
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elipse In reply to greendesire [2006-12-10 19:27:56 +0000 UTC]
Cool, how do you like it so far? I just looked you up on the site, you're Kimberly Baylor right? How did you like Dimos? I had him as my class 3 mentor, he's a pretty cool guy.
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greendesire In reply to elipse [2006-12-10 19:36:17 +0000 UTC]
yup i am. I love it at AM and Dimos rules! what class are you in now?
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elipse In reply to greendesire [2006-12-10 23:10:35 +0000 UTC]
Glad to hear it! I'll add you to my AM buddy list. ^-^ I'm finishing up class 5.
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MikeYork [2006-10-05 14:53:04 +0000 UTC]
I saw this a couple of weeks ago on your AM blog
You have some very nice poses going on here. Also I can really get a feal for teh character and I know how hard that is to achieve so I give you mad props.
Keep it up
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elipse In reply to MikeYork [2006-10-05 15:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Hey Mike, thanks for visiting my blog and for the mad props, lol! I'm glad you like my scene. I doubt I'll be able to animate this term though. Right now I'm doing pre-production on my AM short film and thats more work than I thought it would be. You guys can look forward to seeing some layout/rough blocking around December since that's what we're supposed to end class 5 with. Until then, I'll probably just post concept art and renders of the props and set.
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MikeYork In reply to elipse [2006-10-05 16:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah pre production is a huge part of the process I have found that out the hard way many times. I defiantley look forward to seeing your short film.
Keep in touch
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elipse In reply to MikeYork [2006-10-06 15:42:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, lol. I'm sure we'll speak again in the future. ^-^
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ChaosKomori [2006-09-25 05:23:35 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, fun. ^^ But man, that sound byte is tough to hear. I had to watch it four or five times before I could understand all the dialogue.
OOh, does this mean I can be critical and stuff?? Fweee! Let's see. Firstly, there's some weird floaty semi-invisible ball floating around in front of the girl during the first couple of seconds. It almost looked like one of those little exhale bubbles they have in anime. ^^
And I like the acting. It does convey the emotions really well. But for some reason, it kinda' feels like the charas aren't understanding their own dialogue. In other words, the guy is conveying his frustration and anger really well, but it doesn't look like he's conveying his irony well. .... .... .... I mean. Well. It's really easy for me to say that, but it's really hard to say what could be done to do it better. I mean, I probably wouldn't be able to do it. ._. Hm.
Oh, and maybe on the closeup of the girl she could look up at the guy again. ^_^
((And hehe, this probably means you'll tear me a new one when I post my latest animation, huh?))
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elipse In reply to ChaosKomori [2006-09-25 15:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about the sound quality, I dont know anything about sound editing so I couldn't have fixed it. Lol, that semi-invis ball is Leo's reflection in the window. >_< I agree with you on not knowing how to sell Leo's irony. Once the Am site reopens (they're closed for between term maintinance(sp?)) I'll ask about it on the forums. I originally had the counselor glance up at Leo when she says "get a handle on things", but my mentor said to remove it. He said that making her look up at him will make it seem like she's concerned/cares about him. He said that in the beginning she's trying to be friendly but after he lunges at her she's like o_O...
I was going to "tear you a new one" anyway, else I'd be a bad friend.
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ChaosKomori In reply to elipse [2006-09-25 21:20:39 +0000 UTC]
... Well, maybe the lookup wasn't needed, but her expression doesn't really change much in that closeup. I mean, it's hard to see which word had emphasis. *shrug*
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Darren-Gibson [2006-09-25 04:17:47 +0000 UTC]
I said it before and ill said it again! Its amazing!
+ fav!
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elipse In reply to Darren-Gibson [2006-09-25 15:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and thanks for the fav! I'm glad that you guys like my work.
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elipse In reply to AnimatedSkier [2006-09-25 00:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
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