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elixirphoenix — Go To Another Place
Published: 2007-06-04 19:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 52; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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I want you to escape for one secondI want you to live for one day
With me words
Taking you to places far away
To places that you can never see
So stay with me
Read me words
And fly away
Just relax
And let me words
Take you to another place
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Comments: 4
Hmm... Ok. I'll bite. Now take me somewhere outside myself. Most of your poems just give me something to feel. I loved your Light: The Movie screenplay. That really gave me something I could see as well.
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I actually have more respect for me proseO.o
Me thing is if I don't edit it to death I didn't do a good job.
Yeah...the poems do need more work in that areaO.o
I do feelings usually. They are feelings that just need to be released.
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Interesting. It speaks to me, and at the same time, I'm avoiding an 'advertising through poetry' joke. Just kidding.
This is impressive. Did it take you long to do this?
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Thanks
And it didn't take me long to do this. The only poem that took me a long time (a few days) was me sonnet.
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