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elixirphoenix — Me Strength...
Published: 2007-05-11 02:10:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Me strength, an illusionMe happiness, a work of pure fiction
Me laugh, an echo of a greater time
I fall down
You stand tall
What am I missing
Why do I have to die
Why do I have to suffer
You stand tall
And I fall farther down
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This was a great one, Jashy! ^^
So far, there's five of your poems that I could say I truly love! =]
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Yeah
Hopefully more in the future
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Without a doubt, yes. ^^
You're a great poet. =]
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*bows*
You're a good one also
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So you WANT to be insultedO.O
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It wouldn't hurt if it was the truth because EVERYONE knows the truth hurts and to me I hate being everyone so it wouldn't hurt.
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You'll get better but you DO write goodO.O
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*Looks back on old poems and stories*
No... I think I messed some up. Usually I go by a beat or rhyme scheme. My words then come out all messed up, but hey. I'm not gonna start a fight here. Thanks for the compliment.
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this is how i feel!
i love this! it feels like it is from the heart. good job!
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Thanks
I only really like to write poetry when the emotions come to me fresh
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ur welcome!
yeah, that's usually the only way that i can. i really am bad at poetry, but i like makin up poems. (when there not for school, though!)
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Yeah. You do need to write outside of the classroom to call yourself a writer
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