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elixirphoenix — My Muse
Published: 2008-04-07 15:47:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I lift this cupMy Muse
I drink this liquid
My Muse
Whether for good or ill
It does not matter
Not now
Nor in the future
I will leave you on Mount Olympus
As I spend eternity in Tartarus
My Muse
My pen will write
In this dark night
And far after
The first morning light
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I have to agree with the "Holy crap you used 'my' instead of 'me'" statement...I have to admit it is much nicer to read like this...Very nice write Jash!
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-runs to get a wet cloth and some medicine-
It'll be alright, Jashykins! Just hold in there! Are you having any headaches? Or are you sneezing? -Feels forehead-
Man... Are you alright? You said "my" instead of "me"... o.O
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XD
Me heart is hurting and I can't have caffiene (anxiety attack) as well as no alcohol and drugs.
Thanks
*huggles*
You noticed the change...I couldn't bring meself to do me usual "me" instead of "my" in me poetry...
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Holy crap! You used the word my instead of me! Much more natural to read. Bravo.
And I did get the drinking allusion right away. Didn't even need the edit. Well done.
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