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elixirphoenix — One or Two
Published: 2008-03-03 02:36:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I feel as if
I love as two
I fear as two
I grieve as two
I hate as two
I am two
I am two people
But one body
Yet one soul
In two bodies
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Comments: 6

phate1128 [2008-03-05 22:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like the minimalistic feel, and the quick flow to it. Nice job.

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elixirphoenix In reply to phate1128 [2008-03-06 01:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Juxtaposition22 [2008-03-03 15:32:19 +0000 UTC]

I love the clipped format, and this reads very well, good job for a little poem I think

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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2008-03-03 16:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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tu2 [2008-03-03 06:58:32 +0000 UTC]

very nice!!

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elixirphoenix In reply to tu2 [2008-03-03 14:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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