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Published: 2007-10-28 02:20:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description The Fall and Redemption of Meself
Introduction



It happened the last year of high school, the event that this allegory is based around. At that time I did learn the meaning of sin and damnation. For then did innocence die and I was shown me imperfection, I took me fall. For this event, for years, I have suffered and died numerous times. This event I have, until now, kept to a precious few. Even though I am more ashamed of it than anything else, I could not keep silent, could not keep to meself. This allegory will speak of the feelings before, during, and after the event. If I had wanted to tell the event, and not put such a big emphasis on the feelings, I would not bother with an allegory. In fact, telling the story in actual events would be easier to write, but not to tell.



If I wanted to tell only the pain I went through, I'd have had the heroine going through a cave and getting close to death. Her body would be broken, her spirit would be leaking from her body, and she would have given up hope of ever escaping. But there would be a savior that would bring her out into the light, into a field where no harm ever had been. But, as it is, I want to express feelings of not just one period, but the whole time frame. I do not want to torture you, dear reader, I merely want to let these feelings out.



Did you really think I could reach twenty-one years of age without having a fall? Do I seem like I wouldn't do anything wrong? Does it seem as though what I am going to tell you never happened? Never could happen? Dear reader, place thoughts of innocence away from your mind. Throw it away like an old piece of clothing.



Clio and Melpomene, give me strength to go on with this task. Too long has me mind been covered with movies, pictures, and unfinished writings of this event. Me love's light does not yet have enough room to shine. Even if this work shall prove me death, at least say it shall be finished. This story, though not a tragedy, does have sadness that only a tragedy has. I do find salvation but, alas, the sadness is too encompassing that former rough drafts have been ruined because of the torrent of me tears.



With this, I am asking you for your forgiveness. And if it does not earn your forgiveness, I pray that it earns your understanding. I doubt any of you are perfect, and I will not ask as to what regions of Sin you have come across.

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Comments: 9

Juxtaposition22 [2007-11-01 16:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm looking forward to reading more.

I want to ask something, when you're writing stories where you don't use me instead of I, do you still do it on accident???

Reading so much of your poetry I've even caught myself doing it, and I'm a stickler for gramatical accuracy, you've poisoned me I say! LOL

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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2007-11-01 16:12:21 +0000 UTC]

I use "me" instead of "my" in me poetry. Hence "Myself" becomes "Meself." I HAVE caught meself when writing essays for school using me instead of my and quickly correct meselfXD

Muahahaha! Me plan has worked!

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Juxtaposition22 In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-11-01 16:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, me instead of my, you're right sorry LOL

You're so evil ((((hugs)))) LOL

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DevilRoz [2007-10-28 22:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Don't ask for forgiveness from others. They weren't there. They have no right to judge! There is nothing there for them to forgive. >.<

Nobody's ever perfect and "Sins" are just there to be some line of boundary pushing you towards "perfect". Fuck it. >.<

We're only human.

And I'm only sick and have not a clue why I said any of this...

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elixirphoenix In reply to DevilRoz [2007-10-28 23:10:04 +0000 UTC]

*rubs face*
Ow...I just need this for me own cleansing. Sort of like you having a secret that's eating you from the inside out. It's because of this that I haven't gone to confession since it happened. I could have easily found out when I could go to confession on campus.

And you probably said that because you don't like to see a friend in self-pity.

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DevilRoz In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-28 23:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, no I don't like seeing a friend in self-pity. I'll make it my duty to read all of these, though. ^-^

Heheh... I said "duty"...

Such a kid! XD

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elixirphoenix In reply to DevilRoz [2007-10-28 23:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Doody-poody
XD

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Romi-xoxo [2007-10-28 22:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow,, I look forward to reading more.
It looks very intriguing and Iยดm glad to read stories based on real events.

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elixirphoenix In reply to Romi-xoxo [2007-10-28 22:41:31 +0000 UTC]

I promise not to disappoint you

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