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Published: 2007-10-26 01:58:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description The writing stopped
The pen was dropped
Feelings of unworthiness
Leaving the pen on the ground
Life force of the pen was wasted
Not realized
By its child
But the pen was picked up today
And in the child's hand it will stay
Putting its ink on the pages
Of poems yet unwritten
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Comments: 12

Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-26 15:33:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad a friend picked up the sword again LOL What are we fighting hmmm... boredom and ignorance maybe.

This is deffinitely a poem for poets, and as such I love it

Maybe thinking of blank pages as writings yet unwritten will help me not go crazy with rage when I have writers block

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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-26 15:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
Actually picked up the pen. Fighting for writers everywhere to write!

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xRichyx [2007-10-26 07:15:52 +0000 UTC]

When I read the first line, i was like oh no, someone has stopped writing. then I read the rest of the poem and I was like "whew" that was a relief....

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-10-26 13:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Glad it had that effect

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GrandLordAtos [2007-10-26 02:41:33 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me of many things. How I first began writing, and how I have yet to write the next chapter to my fanfic. O_O

'The Pen' is mightier than the sword. Good job. XD

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elixirphoenix In reply to GrandLordAtos [2007-10-26 12:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DevilRoz [2007-10-26 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Go child then. ^-^

This is another good one, Jashykins. ,)

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elixirphoenix In reply to DevilRoz [2007-10-26 02:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I'm very proud of her

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DevilRoz In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-26 02:29:23 +0000 UTC]

I wish her the best of luck then. My current poem is sad and broken--so I didn't finish it. You can see it if you want, though. *shrugs*

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Warcow-Ushi [2007-10-26 02:08:44 +0000 UTC]

butimas

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elixirphoenix In reply to Warcow-Ushi [2007-10-26 02:11:28 +0000 UTC]

What's butimas?

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Warcow-Ushi In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-26 02:25:48 +0000 UTC]

I'll be honest haven't the fantist clue.

but it is simmilar to beutiful and people at m3h school use it that was so i figured what the hell I'll try it once.

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