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elixirphoenix — Treasured Forever
Published: 2008-12-12 05:06:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 41; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description And when I think it's over
It's just beginning
And when me heart aches
It's only regrowing
And when I cry
It's really you crying too
So take me out of this blue
And take me out of this dark
It's not where I belong
I know I gave you me heart to hold
You may fumble
But I know you won't break it
For it's to be treasured forever by you
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Comments: 4

DreamingRealist89 [2008-12-18 17:30:31 +0000 UTC]

interesting

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elixirphoenix In reply to DreamingRealist89 [2008-12-18 19:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Can you explain your comment?

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DreamingRealist89 In reply to elixirphoenix [2008-12-19 18:04:41 +0000 UTC]

it just made me think of the fact; the poet's expereicnes are a great part of the poem, but some poet's have critisize this kind of poetry, refer to New Critisism.

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elixirphoenix In reply to DreamingRealist89 [2008-12-20 00:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but that's how I write a majority of me poems and prose. It works for me, most of the time. Other times there is more planning and sometimes me writings don't focus on me life. But there, for me, has to be a small something that connects me to the story or I don't consider it worth anything at all.

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