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Published: 2007-03-22 18:46:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 575; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description This a pic I drew for my friend Jack. It's Angemon.

Drawn with pencils and then inked with pens.

Drawn: March 22, 2007
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komodomatta [2007-03-22 23:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! But may I make a few full critiques?

His nose is facing the wrong way, since he is facing toward the left, so should his nose. The lifted arm, I'm sure you've noticed already, is in an uncomfortable position. His shoulders are cocked to the point where he almost looks feminine. The top of his head a a TAD bit too broad, just a bit. It makes him look childish, almost. His whole body is too broad for the thin, thin neck and the small, rounded head. But personally, I like the body as a whole. Just the neck. The stick looks rather unnatural...

But overral, wonderful Angemon pic! He is heroness!

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ElvenDeathMarch In reply to komodomatta [2007-03-23 00:22:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't get the nose thing. Arm was intentional, as are the shoulders. Head seems fine to me, though his neck does need to be thicker...a lot thicker. The stick looks dumb...I tried making it better...but sticks don't agree with me.
Thanks for the critique. Being able to point out so much means you were actually looking at it.

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