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Very crude sketch, might go down again soon. Just doddling to learn how to draw digitally. I'm an old hand-drawing kinda guy.Absolutely no idea why I drew a horse. So I gave it red eyes and fire, to maintain my masculine aura (I'm insecure)
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Madremonte [2015-10-03 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]
Because this is a work in progress, I will give you a few tips how to improve it.
The design of the horse reminds me very much of the supernatural horses in folklore. The baleful red eyes, nostrils, and smoke give an intimidating impression. But the structure of the head needs improvement, to your defense horse anatomy is very hard to master. The basic shape of a horse head is an angular cone. The head shape does variate depending on which breed, but that is the general shape. The eyes are an oval shape and the nostrils are an oblong shape. As you can see in the photograph in the link, you can draw the direct line from the nostril to the eye and the ear. And the neck is directly connected to the head. sylvanfarmauction.com/sites/sy…
An extra tip I'd like to give to you is, make the nostrils wider and draw the ears backwards if you want to give the horse a more aggressive appearance. Those two are an indication of aggressive behaviour.
www.horse-riding-tips-n-chat.c…
Another advise I'd like to give you is to add more colour to the red to give it more depth. I hope this was a fair and constructive analysis for you.
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EmbassyOfTime In reply to Madremonte [2015-10-03 20:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like good advice, all of it, thanks! And yes, horse anatomy is insanely complex!! After it, I felt I needed to consult a medical atlas just to answer my million questions The horse was not supposed to look angry, though. I am not at that level of horse yet
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LockheedTheDragon [2015-10-03 18:03:10 +0000 UTC]
I like it! Don't worry, it looks very masculine to me.
Would you like a more critique type comment? I thought I'd ask since you said it was more of a sketch.
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EmbassyOfTime In reply to LockheedTheDragon [2015-10-03 19:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Feel free to give an indepth critique, but my skills as i -digital- artist are still very rough, so it will no doubt take time before I even have the skill to implement suggestions
(and I am glad my manhood remains intact )
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LockheedTheDragon In reply to EmbassyOfTime [2015-10-03 20:02:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well, I know nothing about digital art. I just noticed a few things like, the neck seems a little wide and so does the muzzle at the end. And, you might of done this on purpose for the sake of simplicity, but it doesn't have a mane. And, if you want to get really technical, if the eyes are glowing (which may not be something you intended, just the color makes me think they are) it would have more of an effect on the color of the horse. I really don't think any of these things are a big deal, and they don't bother me too much.
Also, I've only ever heard of a hellion being a dog. Is this something I don't know about?
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EmbassyOfTime In reply to LockheedTheDragon [2015-10-03 20:47:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you are correct, it is my lack of digital (as opposed to handdrawn) art that is to blame And you are thinking of hellhounds. A hellion, if I recall correctly, is from the words hell and stallion. But it's just something I think I remember, I didn't research it. Maybe I created a new thing
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LockheedTheDragon In reply to EmbassyOfTime [2015-10-03 22:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Ok. Just thought I'd mention it.
Oh, ok, I guess that is it.
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Dlkx93 [2015-10-03 11:51:38 +0000 UTC]
It looks great to me
My horses turn into unrecognizable blobs haha
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EmbassyOfTime In reply to Dlkx93 [2015-10-03 12:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank! So do my people, when I draw them in digital-only. I think the blobs are planning something sinister...
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Dlkx93 In reply to EmbassyOfTime [2015-10-03 12:32:07 +0000 UTC]
...all of my people look like blobs as well I should practice more. My story is top of my priority list, however, so I'm working on that right now
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