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Published: 2014-04-16 18:26:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1005; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Hey guys, I've been working on this t-shirt design for a while and I need some constructive feedback. The client wants a red shirt with white print. They want hand lettering with this verse in a kind of circle shape. I've been staring at this for too long. Do you have any ideas how I can improve this?"Let no one despise your youth, but be an example to the believers in word, in conduct, in love, in spirit, in faith, in purity." - 1 Timothy 4:12
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Thank you! 
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It kind of reminds me of a baseball.
Maybe a circular object like that can inspire something more familiar/catchy?
I think all your work is lovely.
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lol! Now that you mention it, I see what you mean! lol!
Thank you so much
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That is very encouraging to hear. thank you!
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You normally orient the design as a whole straight up and down, so the slight rotation's throwing/putting you off a bit (my guess). It looks good this way though. Just let it go. It's there.
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Thanks for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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It's a tee-shirt. It's not going in the Louvre. For your purposes (and his) it's fine the way it is.
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lol! I know I know....I just like to always improve my skill.
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Epicness! It's amazing!!
But If you are looking for a critique ( And it's really really hard to find one) ; Do something about the 'But'. It's fine as it is ( as in it looks great!) but do something so it stands out a little and becomes sort of a turning point for the verse, not a little side point tacked on the end, you know what I mean?
Everything else is utter perfection!
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Thanks for that!
I know what you mean. I had a difficult time with the "but"
Thanks so much!
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No problems!
Is it working out for you?
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Honestly, I haven't made any changes yet. I gave it to my client to see what they think before I change it and they are still thinking about it. They like it, just haven't made a final decision. So I might not need to change anything.
Thanks for the input!
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WooHoo!! That's what I like to here!!
And no extra work for you!
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I feel like something just isn't right. It looks awkward and off balance. I just can't place my finger on it.
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Nonesense, there is perfect balance.
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