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Published: 2013-12-30 05:48:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 338; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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I wear my pain like a badge
Every line tells a story
                 Is a part of my past
                             My history
Like the rings in a tree
               Unabashed candour
Like the craters of a satellite
              Pock marked with years of abuse
Like an asteroid knocked out of orbit
                Alone
                          Isolated
                                        Drifting
Through an endless void with nothing
to ponder
               But the emptiness
Speeding faster and faster to its death
Will my time come
Will I go out in a fire storm
               A blaze of glory
                              To die young
Taking the pain of a million, billion
lives with me
            Or will I drift forever
Left to contemplate my scars
Put upon me by others colliding
             And breaking and taking
                              And taking
What happens when there is nothing
left to give
             Nothing left to take
Will I welcome the release
Will I be reborn
These lines tell a story
           No longer mine to tell
They live on me like parasites
           A symbiosis
We help each other
But it’s a sick love
Do I need it
          Or does it need me
Who will go first
Blaze in a glorious fire
Die quietly into the night
                The dead or the dying
     The infirmed or the disease
                   The suffering or the sickness
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Comments: 5

TheQuietlyLoudOne [2013-12-30 18:21:52 +0000 UTC]

 This is beautiful!  I had to read it twice to really catch the meaning of it because I was  caught up in the symbolism and metaphors.  I feel like this poem is really hopeful, but in a bit of a darker way, if you understand what I mean.  Keep writing - this is AMAZING!

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emo-nerd In reply to TheQuietlyLoudOne [2013-12-31 01:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanx It means a lot when people like my writing. I'm glad the symbolism came across, I kind of wrote it in a daze and wasn't sure if any of that would make sense later lol. Ya that's definitely a good way of looking at it. I'm glad you could see something hopeful in this Again, thank you so much for reading and the compliments

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TheQuietlyLoudOne In reply to emo-nerd [2013-12-31 03:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Of course! 😊

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Kaysa2 [2013-12-30 06:45:31 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! Keep writing!! You're very good!

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emo-nerd In reply to Kaysa2 [2013-12-30 08:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanx so much! I love writing but I don't do it very often anymore, and I'm very critical of my own stuff, so thank you so much for the compliment

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