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Enbi-to-Miruku β€” Draw a circle, that's the Earth

Published: 2012-08-05 13:11:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 20412; Favourites: 680; Downloads: 91
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- Ita-chan, why is a circle the Earth? - Turning over, Holy Roman empire quietly asked himself.

Italy, how could you imagine such an image?

To me, since birth, a circle had always been a mere circle. Draw a circle on the ground and step on it, I could never reach anything. I would just be chasing after a delusional goal, forever.

But now, I finally have you, someone who will help me to end that circle. I have finally found the sole purpose for every of my actions. I could finally step on my circle, and I need not any longer concern myself with suspicions or confusions.

Draw a circle, that's the Earth.

And you, my dear Italy, are my starting point as well as the goal at my end.

I will do everything, for your sake. I will win this seemingly never ending battle, just for you.

The young empire brought the thoughts with him to sleep.


And the thoughts still followed him even at the moment where he faced the guillotine.

-- Marukaite Chikyuu, originally by (translated by )

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EDIT: NEWS HERE!! I got ~BakanoHealthy 's permission! Now who wants me to translate the fanfiction? I'm telling you, the ending she wrote is VERY satisfying for those who don't want Holy Rome to die~


is a great writer, but sadly she only writes in Vietnamese. This is her original work and what you just read is merely my crappy translation.

She writes not only fanfictions but many other things as well, and they're really inspiring.

You probably already knew this, but here's the translation for the German senteces:

Italien, es tut mir leid = Italy, I'm sorry
Ich liebe dich = I love you
I used Google Translate.

To criticizers:

I did all I could because, honestly, I love the story and it's been a long time since I actually draw something more serious. But there's still something wrong with the picture. That being said, I don't know why. So please, tell me where I did wrong. Please.
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Comments: 265

BritishOtaku [2013-01-21 19:28:25 +0000 UTC]

*cries in corner* so sad, good art work but *sniff* so sad

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GoldenGirl954 [2012-12-11 20:52:23 +0000 UTC]

How sad!
I love the details here

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UYMAAGEEK2012 [2012-11-25 21:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Y U DO THIS TO ME

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A-and-S-Studios [2012-10-25 01:15:00 +0000 UTC]



I have an idea for a Holy Rome fic. It's sort of a Holy RomeXChibitalia, GermanyXItaly thing. I would try and explain what it's about but... I can't really. It's... really hard to understand the consept. It's suppost to be about HRE's death and the red string theory and... yeah. Anyway, I just thought I'd tell you and if I ever write it/finnish writing it, I'll give you a link if you like.

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to A-and-S-Studios [2012-10-25 12:07:40 +0000 UTC]

That's really interesting! I'd love to read your fanfiction once you finish it

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arcane66 [2012-10-18 14:38:09 +0000 UTC]

aww im a little depressed

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to arcane66 [2012-10-25 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

*pats* me too, when I was drawing this. and even now.

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arcane66 In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-10-25 14:39:41 +0000 UTC]

XP

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Pixel-Andy [2012-10-17 00:51:16 +0000 UTC]

I don't see anything wrong with the drawing, but I'll give you my critique anyway

I like your use of colour and crayon-like effects, the colours are vivid and youthful. Not sure what to say about the story... seems a bit morbid in contrast to the way you represented it. Another good point is that the anatomy and poses are excellent. I'll give you 9 out of 10, for the contrast with the story.

On behalf of GCC

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Pixel-Andy [2012-10-25 12:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the critique! (and many apologizes for this late reply)

You're a great critique giver, I tell you. I'd be delighted to have more of your comments on my future artworks

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Pixel-Andy In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-10-25 14:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment
I try to be as helpful as possible when giving critiques, and I'm glad it proved useful to you

Will surely give more on your future submissions~

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muffinz23 [2012-10-09 20:38:25 +0000 UTC]

OAO
I was browsing DeviantART with my little sister and I came across this picture. Once I saw the pictures of Chibitalia I covered her eyes and pushed her away. However I stayed to look at this awesome work of art. This made me so.... sad/excited/depressed. I love it. Poor Holy Rome... Poor Chibitalia

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to muffinz23 [2012-10-11 14:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the long and thoughtful comment I really appreciate how you take your time and put real thoughts into your words. And I'm delighted to know that you like my art.

Also, you remind me about myself, since I usually browse dA with my little sister too, and I would do the same thing if I were you. It's so sweet of you to keep her from getting upset~

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muffinz23 In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-10-20 01:30:12 +0000 UTC]

It's no trouble at all. I can't draw for the life of me. My drawings are usually half done. I can see the amount of effort you put into this. It really is very sweet every time I look at it.

Aren't little sisters just the cutest? XD

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to muffinz23 [2012-10-25 12:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't underestimate yourself ^^ I've taken a quick look at your gallery; I think you can be a great artist if you carry on with your artwork instead of dropping in the middle. I'd love to see more of your art~

About little sisters, why yes, yes they are

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nspireinc [2012-10-06 08:30:13 +0000 UTC]

:C

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UniversalWaifu [2012-10-04 01:09:10 +0000 UTC]

*dies*
I CAN'T
WHAT

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AlchemistKeyblade [2012-09-30 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]

...T=T

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KashTheKat [2012-09-29 20:52:09 +0000 UTC]

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villen1 [2012-09-27 16:56:32 +0000 UTC]

itΒ΄s so sweet and sad

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Mysteryismylife [2012-09-20 02:42:01 +0000 UTC]

The...The feels....

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Mysteryismylife [2012-09-22 14:43:16 +0000 UTC]

I know. I felt that way when I read my friend's fanfiction...

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cicilykittycat [2012-09-17 23:26:27 +0000 UTC]

D''':> i-i love it

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to cicilykittycat [2012-09-19 14:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~

oh my god your icon >///<

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cicilykittycat In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-09-19 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks u and ur welcome

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Chibi-chi4 In reply to ??? [2012-09-16 07:07:04 +0000 UTC]

THE FEEEEEEELLLLLLLSSSASSS

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Chibi-chi4 [2012-09-17 15:10:12 +0000 UTC]

*pats*

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Chibi-chi4 In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-09-17 20:15:38 +0000 UTC]

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Clari-net In reply to ??? [2012-09-15 17:26:03 +0000 UTC]

A guillotine!?
Why, France, WHY?

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Clari-net [2012-09-17 15:17:14 +0000 UTC]

It's war, ma chΓ©rie... Je suis vraiment dΓ©solΓ©, but that's how it is... Would you like me to make it up for you~~

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Clari-net In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-09-17 15:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Err... no *runs away*

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Pikame45 In reply to ??? [2012-09-12 21:07:24 +0000 UTC]

if you excuse me.. I'll go cry out my feelings
I still love it though!

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Pikame45 [2012-09-17 15:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww Don't cry dear... Here, have a cookie~ And thank you, I'm glad you like it~

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Mikumikucat [2012-09-08 23:08:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying rivers now... it's BEATIFUL, yet so sad

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Mikumikucat [2012-09-09 14:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , but don't cry... Here, have a cookie~

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Dolphinz514 [2012-09-05 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]

;A; That was so traumatizing! Yet amazing! *splode*

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to Dolphinz514 [2012-09-05 04:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you!!~

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Dolphinz514 In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-09-05 05:00:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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CheshierTHEcat [2012-08-30 16:47:15 +0000 UTC]

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to CheshierTHEcat [2012-08-31 04:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Have a cookie, dear

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CheshierTHEcat In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-08-31 14:43:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you *eat's cookie*

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DevilKiru [2012-08-30 12:00:41 +0000 UTC]

so amazing and so sad at the same time

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to DevilKiru [2012-08-31 04:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DevilKiru In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-08-31 09:52:58 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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xXHeartlessGirlXx In reply to ??? [2012-08-30 00:35:57 +0000 UTC]

May I ask for explanation of story behind the picture?

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to xXHeartlessGirlXx [2012-08-30 05:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sure. Uhm... As I've stated in my Artist Description, the story is a HRE x Chibitalia fanfiction written by my friend. So what I am about to explain is in no way the official/canon, and belongs to the proper fanfiction Author.

It's a three-part story; it was not a trilogy, only a story separated into three parts - I'm saying this because the names of each part is actually quite meaningful and contribute to the concept of the whole story I guess.

The first part showed HRE and Chibitalia when they were small. Chibitalia taught HRE a song - it's "Marukaite Chikyuu" of course. HRE kept remembering the song as he got older.

The second part was when HRE got into the long wars. The night before an important battle he pondered about wars, and remembered the song "Marukaite Chikyuu". I've extracted that part and translated it into English - you can read it in my Artist Description. After that battle HRE got executed on a guillotine. This is also the part of the story that I based my artwork on, as you can see.

The third part was set in present time. Italy taught Germany the song "Marukaite Chikyuu". The whole dialogue between them was almost exactly like the dialogue between HRE and Chibitalia back in the old days.

And, yes, the Author is a GerIta fan as well as a HRE x Chibitalia fan, so you could guess what she was implying anyway xD

I hope my explanation isn't too confusing, especially since my grammar isn't quite... eh... clear.

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xXHeartlessGirlXx In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-08-31 21:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Ah, muchas gracias. ^_^ This is very sweet, no worries, your words were easy to read. I shall now favorite this and the writing.

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xReDMemory [2012-08-28 14:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Hi,I'm Coming from To Critique you,

I Think that because you wrote 'To criticizers' i gotta point out that no art is perfect,Like nothing is. Theres a difference between criticizers and critique givers (Usually a good critique in my opinion won't only point out negative things,but also good things)

So~

Good things - Well,even though i don't know what the story about,I'm not a fan of Hetalia (Yet ) But my sister is so i know a few things,But it doesn't matter here xD I'm not an emotional person at all,But i bet those who are found this touching/sad~ You say that the story is not originally yours?Well ill try to critique most on the drawing~

I Like your style,And this drawing,I Can't really say why,But your good at drawing,

Bad things - I'm not sure if i say this because my style,But the lines look a little sketchy,actually i think this is nice especially for manga-looking deviations,So i'm not sure if its a good thing or a bad one (If its your style i mean or just for this deviation etc)

In Italy's Part,theres white parts,I Know its a certain style but i don't really like it for some reason.

I Didn't really have anything Good/Bad to say,Sorry I Usually don't draw according to things (Like anatomy) I Just draw,so its harder for me to critique,I Hope this somehow helped you and this isn't offending i didn't try it to be.

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Enbi-to-Miruku In reply to xReDMemory [2012-08-29 03:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for taking your time to give a long and thoughtful critique, I really, really appreciate it.

Well... I intended to make the line sketchy so I scanned my original sketch (instead of inking digitally as I always do with my other artworks), because I want to give it a, uhm, rougher feeling. It's not my usual style to leave it sketchy though ^^

Italy's part was my fail mimic of the anime adaptation xD I know it's odd for me to say but I don't like it either xD xD

So, to sum it up, again, thank you for your critique! Constructive critiques like yours could never be offending in any way, so don't worry ^^

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xReDMemory In reply to Enbi-to-Miruku [2012-08-29 11:34:57 +0000 UTC]

I Saw it on other of your art xD and i see.

Mimic?xD Sorry i forgot what that word ment

I See,Alright!;3 I'm always trying to point out the good things as much as i want to point out the ones that needs improvement xD So i'm happy its not offending And Np!;3

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