EndlessScript In reply to GenasArt [2014-03-18 22:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I am glad you like it!

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-18 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]

My point in the last comment was that I didn't describe specifics because I wanted people to look deeper than what was right in front of them.

When I said vast concept I meant an interesting point of view. You might felt that the poem was about how "love hurts" but others might have a different take on it. Because everyone has different experiences so I wanted kind of like a prompt for people to think on.

I am sorry that you don't like the poem. And I am sorry you can't get any deeper than "love hurts" or "I was hurt".

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-18 21:26:17 +0000 UTC]

there is no further depth in that sentence  it is not deep  or an interesting point of view its lame and you should expand your thoughts your poetry will be much better and I don't care if im being rude bad poetry is bad poetry

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-18 22:21:05 +0000 UTC]

The word "bad" is an opinion all in itself.

I'm going to share my thoughts whenever I was writing this.
It's about symbolism.
To me if I were to read this from a 3rd person perspective I would think that the girl writing this is saying that she is in a relationship where the person who she is involved with is dominant and won't let her speak because she is a woman.

But like I said its only a mater of perspective and the poem it's self is very versatile.

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-18 23:54:26 +0000 UTC]

no im sorry but it is not versatile

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-19 15:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Why are you sorry for your OPINION?

It's funny how you say it like it's a fact.

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-19 16:04:19 +0000 UTC]

It is a fact

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-19 16:21:38 +0000 UTC]

I think ignorance speaks loudest when you can't differentiate between opinions and facts.

And I think I am done arguing over YOUR OPINION that you should have kept to yourself in the first place.

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EndlessScript In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-20 17:08:22 +0000 UTC]

I take constructive criticism. You know criticism that actually helps me improve my work not judgments.

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-19 18:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Its a fact that that "poem" is lame im sorry you cant take critisisim

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-18 19:01:07 +0000 UTC]

I kept it shorter and I didn't explain in detail what it meant to me because I wanted the reader to be able to put some of their input into this.

I mean I could have 'expanded my thoughts' a lot more but I wanted the poem itself to carry a more vast concept than just what MY individual thought was when writing this.

I am sorry that this specific poem doesn't appeal to you but it seems like you didn't put as much meaning into the words as I did when writing it.

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