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Published: 2014-03-18 16:14:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Sometimes
The biggest trees grow near
The power lines.
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brettprince [2014-03-19 22:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes
smaller trees grow under
the power lines

I.. I just cant help being so deep

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-20 17:14:57 +0000 UTC]

 So your way of rebounding that is by commenting on almost every deviation I've submitted? You must have a lot of time on your hands.

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LeDbrite [2014-03-18 16:20:46 +0000 UTC]

You're right, there is something deep about the thought of how the biggest trees sometimes grow near power lines, it's almost like the thought of someone who's influential is usually closer to falling then anyone else realizes. It's an interesting thought. And you did a great job with the simplicity of this poem, well done!

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EndlessScript In reply to LeDbrite [2014-03-18 16:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much! And that is almost exactly what I was thinking!

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LeDbrite In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-19 14:45:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! lol, great minds think alike! But you did an excellent job of capturing the idea.

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EndlessScript In reply to LeDbrite [2014-03-19 15:09:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks lol c:

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LeDbrite In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-20 20:05:32 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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