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Published: 2015-01-19 06:45:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 925; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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I just got a Staedtler 5B here and want to try out how will my Doujinshi will come out.
And I am quite satisfied with the outcome by my friends, family member and colleagues stated that they like the first version one more because it is cleaner..... And I am here like. "My real Doujinshi will be done Digitally" xD
And as promise in the Part 2 of the Prologue it will explain more of the story/plot of my Doujinshi.
AND STILL I CANNOT THINK OF A TITLE FOR MY DOUJINSHI. SOMEONE HELP ME D:
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LORD DEATH WHHYYYYYYY?!!!!
Why would I draw something Like This?!!
In All Honesty, I don't know why I did this, It is just like my hand have a life on its own D:
In my mind I was thinking of, Lord Death entering and proclaiming that it is forbidden or something but then like magic, Kid said No. (making the story interesting? I guess)
ANYWAY, HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT, 'cause I will be doing Chapter 1 Soon ^^
PART ONE
Prologue Part1 -1
Prologue Part1 -2
Prologue Part1 -3
PART TWO
Prologue Part2 -1
Prologue Part2 -2
Prologue Part2 -3 - You are Here ^^
Death the Kid and Maka Albarn (c) Atsushi Okubi
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Comments: 5
Alright so I just binge-read your doujinshi, and I figure that it would probably be more convenient for both of us if I just saved my commentary until the (current) end.
First of all: HOLY SHIZZ???? YOU'RE MAKING A MULTI-PAGE DOUJINSHI?? Even I didn't have the stamina for that! Wow- I applaud your commitment both to your art and to this pairing. Doujinshis take a lot of work- but its great to see someone making a school love KiMa doujinshi that's actually in ENGLISH- wow. Just... wow. You can be the queen of the KiMa fandom for that.
Second of all. I love the style you used. It's cutesy and looks like a *nonspecific* anime produced around the 2008-2010 era, which is amazing. I love love LOVE the way you did the eyes and hair- it carries a very shoujo feeling that I only WISH I could convey in my own art. The art is clean where it needs to be and the layout is great- not to mention the innovative use of pencil to substitute for tone, and the way you make the backgrounds look. Fabulous! It's also nice to see Maka and Kid in their end-of-the-manga designs, as those are typically more rare in this fandom.
Also, in regards to the plot so far- I like the way Maka confessed to Kid. It was really cute and the panels let it flow nicely. I also like the way the reader feels Kid's internal conflict about her confession (I'm assuming he rejected her for some kind of immortal shinigami reason). The range of emotions you drew him in is nice, and the way each page seems finished with some kind of cliff-hanger is great as well.
My suggestions for the future:
Maybe draw a few more full body shots, or shots of Kid and Maka in the same panel. It would be refreshing to be able to place where they're located in the scene, and might gives the pages more variance so you don't get bored drawing close-ups over and over. Full body shots with a blank or nearly blank background convey dismal feelings of apathy, especially when the characters in them are silhouettes (this may be useful in the near future). Along with this, it might be a good idea to digitally edit your pages before posting. Personally, I use Fotor.com (mostly because it's free) because if you increase 'brightness' to about 12-15 (underneath 'Basic'), exposure to about 10 (under 'Fine-Tune'), highlights to 60-70 (fine-tune), and shadows to 3 (fine-tune), then the comic will come out looking cleaner. If you want, I could digitally edit the panels for you. Its entirely up to you.
Anyways- great comic. It was enjoyable and cute, the are was excellent, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
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I AM SO SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW. THANK YOU SO MUCH SENPAI!!
Tho, the queen of Kima, hehe... I don't think so...
Yeah, it is kinda hard making a doujinshi. I am not even past chapter 1 yet.
I am not really good with coming up a introduction. hehe
BUT SERIOUSLY I AM REALLY SPEECHLESS, MY MIND HAD GONE BLANK
BUT I promise to keep your advice in mind. THANK YOU SO MUCH SENPAI!!
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WHAT? KID TAKE BACK WHAT YA JUST SAID BEFORE I KILL YOU!!!! >:I
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Whaaaaaaa?! KID HOW DARE YOUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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