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EvilpixieA β€” My Sweet Destruction
Published: 2011-01-28 05:01:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 366; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 5
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Description Dear Love,

Love at first sight is meaningless. But I gave up meaning a long time ago.

The first time we met I could not have loved you more. We danced a strange dance through the streets of New York; a slow drunken euphoric stagger. We lay together on the path, on the road and on top of the world; I was captured in your embrace. We dined on nothing, bathed in the colours of life and laughed in the face of the suddenly beautiful world; oh how I loved you that night. The first night we met my Sweet Destruction.

But then you left and everything was cold. I longed for you, my love, I cried for you. I wanted nothing more but to feel your touch again, my love, sweeping through my icy yet burning veins. So I went out late at night and tempted you out on yet another late night date through the dark streets of the big apple.

We danced again, we sung once more, we laughed and lay and held onto each other as we had done before and as you have done to so many others. Night after night we would play our games, week after week you would slip away, month after month I would find you again and year after year you held me in your snare.

Sweet Destruction, I want to have you, to hold you again. I want your touch to wash away the wicked sense of the world around me. I long for you, I love you, I need you.

But, Sweet Destruction, the men in white tell me to let you go. You have sunk your claws into the middle of my brain, you have torn through my lungs and reached under my skin. I can't think straight without because of you. You have feasted on my body and left me hollow all while I was so in love with you.

So, Sweet Destruction, this is goodbye. I will never stop loving you but my hands are tied. They're keeping me in lockup for the stash I tried to hide…

PS I will always love you, my love, my Sweet Destruction.

From: one of your addicts.
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Comments: 7

AleciaMaria [2011-05-12 02:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Aw, it was so sweet, and very well written!

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EvilpixieA In reply to AleciaMaria [2011-05-12 02:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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AleciaMaria In reply to EvilpixieA [2011-05-12 02:38:59 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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MattsyKun [2011-02-02 01:35:42 +0000 UTC]

This....is absolutely beautiful. Just...I don't even know. Beautiful.

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EvilpixieA In reply to MattsyKun [2011-02-02 16:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much. I makes me happy inside.

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Aprifileney0099 [2011-01-29 03:37:34 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. At first, I truly thought this was about love, but you gave this a really different reflection. After reading the description and then reading the text again, I feel what the addict feels... That addiction, to drug, to anything. This text could be related to anything, but I like that you've chosen drugs and other destructive addictions.

I am not an expert in these kinds of things (even though I'm a writer myself) but I think that this is perfect except for one thing; the introduction is a little uncomplete. You know, the first sentence saying "Love at the first sight is meaningless. But I gave up on meaning a while ago." I bet just another simple word could make it better.

Anyways, that is just my opinion; and I may be wrong. I'm just basing my self on what I've seen before. So, good luck

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EvilpixieA In reply to Aprifileney0099 [2011-01-29 16:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the advice! That's really want I want right now so I can spit polish my work before it is judged so it can be the best it can be before hand.
Also, thanks a heap and a half for your support! I am really really really grateful for it!

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