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More Alli! With the power of lust, Alli has awakened the ability to eat even more food! What will come of this? Will this be enough to defeat the cooks? Why is lightning shooting from her eyes! None of that, answered next chapter! Some of it, answered in the chapter after that!
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I still think you should have her two friends help out with the eating, even though they would probably not make a dent in it. Though I guess it would buy her time. But it is your story, do what you will.
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Well, it's not gonna be exactly like that, but your previous suggestion of it added a small bit into the story board. That's all I can really say
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R-r-really? :3 Thank you for saying so!
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No problem! Looking forward to the next part!
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