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EyelessAngel — Magazine Layout 2
Published: 2004-09-28 17:47:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 8085; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 285
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Ok so I fixed a couple of things to this design.It is looking a lot better, I changed the typeface to thin, and took off some quares on the second page.
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well, i think this is so much better than the first one, but i'm still not sure about the photos maybe they all should be in color (one in b&w feels like is breaking the unity... or something) and also the subject of the photos i'm not really sure if it's so related to the article.. but that's just me
it looks very nice in general
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Yeah I was told not to use the black and white photo, it really does take away from it. As soon as I can find some good photos for this, I will change them. I'm sure it will make everything go together.
Thanks.
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I have a few things to say.
My main one Is I would lose the black and white picture. I don't know it kinda messes up the whole flow. The rest is Really Vibrant and colorful, I just don't think that works realy well with this new layout. I'll elaborate more when I see you.
I love everything else though. I like how you did the coloums on both pages. You have have one long article on one page a lot of people will get bored and stop reading and spreading it out like that give thier eyes a break ^-^
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ok i like typos haha
this one is much better than the other one, i am sure they will love this layout
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Wow. Very good. I like all. Is amazing and is my fav. Congratulation. 
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Thank you. I just hope the people from Clutch Magazine love it.
Thank you also for the favourite.
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You are welcome friend. 
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oh! AND the font looks GREAT!
what is it anyways?
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Thanks.
The typeface used is eurofurence
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wow i like this a lot better
the changes actually make a huge difference. with the loss of those 4 extra squares from each colour, it really creates a nice frame on the second page.
and i like the change of the photos too.
definately from a dedicated cosmo reader (ive gradded from the teeney bopper mags lol), i love this.
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Yeah I know. The design before this that I didn't upload was different, but the second page wasn't working so then I came with the frame on the second page. It turned out really good.
Thank you.
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yeah its looking alot better, it does have this girly mag vibe going on , not that i read girly mags
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Okay, this looks GREAT. I don't know if you work at a magazine or not (and right now I'm too lazy to go and check 
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LoL this what I wanted to hear from someone. It tells me I'm doing something right.
Thank you.
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No problem! Also, the article is something that girls WANT to read about. You can never go wrong with boys.
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