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Published: 2015-01-15 18:11:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1039; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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~~Jiwe~~This is Jiwe (gee-way), and her name is Swahili for "stone."
I named her as such because of her opal stones imbedded in her skin.
In spite of a Swahili name, she is also from outer space and goes with my original story, "The Kosmet."
Her species are called Saeshans, and all of them have a stone of some sort imbedded in them (naturally), and it defines their element.
These creatures are all able to create a stone with their breath.
They often keep them in collections in space, using their power to make them stay in one spot in a group, much like earth's gravity.
And yes, they're falsely immortal.
I may have more on the species later, but for now i will just focus on Jiwe.
At a young age, Jiwe and her younger brother, Insons (Latin for "harmless"), got separated from their parents.
And given how big space is, you can imagine they may be separated for some time~.
Insons was a bit slow; he had mental handicaps and learning problems, making him vulnerable and in need of a constant escort.
His older sister, loving him to no end, had no problem following and leading him everywhere they went.
They were inseparable, and each gave each other the love their parents could not give them in their absence.
But one day everything changed...
Insons got away from Jiwe at some point, and flew to a life planet with people on it.
Upon his landing, he was soon found by people, an captured.
Jiwe, a day behind her missing brother, spent several weeks looking for him on this earth and eventually found him, but not in good condition.
Insons had been found by scientists, who were keeping him for study in a secret lab.
By the time Jiwe got in to get to him, she found that he was deathly ill, and went on a rampage.
Angered by these creatures' greed and lack of care for her sibling, Jiwe unleashed hell on them in a violent slaughter, killing them all with no remorse.
Sadly she was hardly aware of her actions, blinded by her rage and bent on saving her dying brother.
She eventually pulled him from the building, caked in blood and tying to stay optimistic, but Insons soon died in her embrace.
Furiously hurt by this, Jiwe screamed and screamed until her voice went hoarse, and she ascended back into space with her dead brother and allowed him to turn back into star dust. She buried his collected bones on a desert planet in his memory, and left a marker there for his grave.
Two years later, she is no longer the happy-go-lucky playful creature she was before her great loss.
She is stubborn, aggressive, defensive, and according to the Galactic Counsel surrounding the planet (unbeknownst to the earthlings).....a criminal.
Galactic Police have been after her for two (earth) years, meaning to send her to a prison for deliberately revealing herself to and then slaughtering humans and disrupting earth life.
"Galactic Homicide," as they would address it.
She now runs a criminal, trying to hide from Galactic law and stay alive.
In time, Jiwe will be apprehended and taken to prison, only to be pardoned by Orbit!
Orbit is actually the character from which the entire Kosmet story is founded.
But yes, he pardons her, understanding on a level that the counsel could not.
Soon after that, she returned to the life planet and began exploring.
After a few months, she found herself infatuated with it all, and even tried to forgive man for being such a cruel creation.
Eventually she was educated by The Great Creator, and learned to forgive and slowly began to come back to her old self.
She used to sing beautifully in her spare time, and particularly to Insons.
But upon his death she stopped, and God took it and gave it to someone else, as He has always promised us.
But when Jiwe learned to forgive and found inspiration, she started practicing again, and God granted her singing voice back.
She is now still stubborn, headstrong and flighty, but she also now has a love of the life planets that contain mankind, and even loves the gravity of planets!
She also now knows forgiveness and tries to be more optimistic.
She loves to free fall from the Atmosphere, playing and twisting at high speeds in earth gravity.
She knows now that her brother is where he belongs, and she aspires to see him again someday.
In the near future, she will be re-united with her parents, and even find a mate.
And they will conceive, and have a boy~.
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OMG I hate the underside of the wing in the bottom
UUUGH *siiiigh* ........i'm still learning to draw feathered wings, so i guess it's a start
There is also a size chart in the top, but at the last minute i decided i wanted Jiwe to be bigger and had Insons be the size of the dragon in the chart XD
Also i intend to make her eyes smaller and look a little more mature, and possibly make her body look better XD
She has opal horns, nails, and bone, and some opal stones in her skin.
Two on her forehead, five on the base of each horn in the skin, eight on each shoulder, one on the "hand" of each wing on the outside, and one on her tail
she also breathes white opal fire!
I really am proud of her, but am not sure how much i will draw of her given how DIFFICULT SHE WAS TO COLOR :bademoticon: GAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! nhh....
But you know, If it isn't difficult, it probably isn't worth it
So i hope you enjoy her and i hope it's all written ok, a family member was talking forever and ever and EVER WHILE I WAS TRYING TO TYPE AND I COULDN'T CONCENTRATE!!!
IT TOOK ME LIKE TWO HOURS TO TYPE THIS, DEAR GOD!!!
THEN I HAD TO MAKE MY MOM COFFEE AND THIS AND THAT AND THIS AND THAT!!!
SO PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, LOVE THIS AND THE CREATURE AND PLEAAASE LEAVE A COMMENNNNT!!!
---DO NOT STEAL MY CONCEPTS, ART OR IDEAS!!!---
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Comments: 32
redwallfvs [2015-03-31 02:13:20 +0000 UTC]
OMG I have an idea of gemstones on dragons foreheads that define their element and a bunch of other stuff! ^^
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to redwallfvs [2015-03-31 03:20:10 +0000 UTC]
AHAHHHHH THAT'S AWESOME!!!
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Tyto-Owl-Lover [2015-01-16 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]
She's AWESOME!!! I love the Opal and the glittery affects and LAAAAAAAAAAAA
She reminds me of my character Sarah x3 Sarah went through something similar. She had lost her best (and only) childhood friend/companion to slavery. She attempted to stow away on the trade ship, but ended up on the wrong one. The ship she was on got raided by pirates, who found her and and the captian raised her as his own. (She was 6) ^v^ Eventually he died and Sarah became captain. (At like, age 19) Years later she is reunited with her friend. [Lots of story later] Sarah gets killed in a brutal battle, but doesn't pass on. She becomes a Guardian/Spirit Guide (and not exactly the best of one x3) for a young boy, Tyler.
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Tyto-Owl-Lover [2015-01-16 06:34:15 +0000 UTC]
awwww cool! and HAHAHA THANK YOU
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zhidkovv [2015-01-16 02:57:18 +0000 UTC]
Ahh... So beautiful. Nad the insight story gives me more of you to know.
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zhidkovv In reply to Fae-CaptainofDreams [2015-01-16 04:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Whatched the Dinosaur by Disney. Such an awesome cartoon.
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to zhidkovv [2015-01-16 04:57:24 +0000 UTC]
That movie was great!
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zhidkovv In reply to Fae-CaptainofDreams [2015-01-16 06:25:46 +0000 UTC]
So when is the auction character coming out?
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to zhidkovv [2015-01-16 06:35:57 +0000 UTC]
ugh it's laying out in a sketch pad on the floor, waiting to be finished XP it's sketched but i haven't picked major qualities yet~.
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HolyCross9 [2015-01-16 01:06:45 +0000 UTC]
Her brilliant blue coloration reminds me of the beautiful Princess Luna from MLP:FiM!
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to HolyCross9 [2015-01-16 01:37:00 +0000 UTC]
awww! THANK YOU!!!
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HolyCross9 In reply to Fae-CaptainofDreams [2015-01-16 03:08:58 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome.
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Cd749 [2015-01-15 21:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha I waste no time XD
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Cd749 In reply to Fae-CaptainofDreams [2015-01-15 21:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Your character looks like she has gotten glitter all over herself XD She is cute
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Cd749 [2015-01-15 23:48:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you: hahaha yes she is sparkly
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Bysthedragon [2015-01-15 20:33:11 +0000 UTC]
That's really cool! I'd love to see a picture some time of Bys and Jiwe interacting, if it's ok with you...
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Bysthedragon [2015-01-15 21:01:23 +0000 UTC]
Aw hey maybe if I ever get the motivation! thank you very much
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TheDragonChronicler In reply to Fae-CaptainofDreams [2015-01-16 00:48:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. ^_^
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Naeda [2015-01-15 19:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaaaaaaaw it's very nice!
I love the design and color, and this littles paws <3 It's so sweeeet <3
Nice work!
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Naeda [2015-01-15 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you sooo much!!!
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Fae-CaptainofDreams In reply to Ash-NavofDreams [2015-01-15 19:02:36 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWW THANKS!!! I didn't expect you to read it yet lol XD I'M GLAD YOU DID THOUGH i'm assuming you understand what i meant with the "part from my life" thing
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