chantrywphillips [2014-12-22 19:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the wait. I don't check my notes that much. Lol.
I'd like to start with values used near the lamp. You can see some of the glow from the fire outside the lantern, but the shadows could be a little more prominent. Usually its the anatomy in a picture I have to critiique, but honestly as far as red goes, its done rather well. The wolf could use a little work around the face, but that's not really that important. It fits with the style in which Red was drawn. Other than a value tweak,  and maybe a little work on drapery and folds....you did an amazing job.

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4EH0V [2014-11-13 14:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Scary! Scary!!!! Very scary!

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o-Oxalis-o [2014-11-10 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Really nice, I love the face of the wolf! He is amazing!  

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AmmoBot-HB [2014-11-10 03:49:29 +0000 UTC]

It certainly has a lot of potential here. The scene you set is powerful but the execution needs some work. What I find particularly wrong with this is that the colors seem to be a bit muddled and don't blend smoothly. It gives it this unfinished kind of look to it. Remember that the more time you put into it the better it can get. Also with a scene like this you want to convey emotion as best as possible. One way to do that is with the expressions which you capture pretty well between these two. What you should improve on is the lighting and coloring to affect mood. The scene is dark, but it's too dark. The lantern should illuminate more and create a harsh yellow glow around the characters that brightens those planes and adds a more sinister tone to the overall picture. It's almost there keep it up!

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TheClassyDinoBat [2014-11-07 23:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Alright, here goes! I honestly have spent a really long time looking for problems, and I still haven't found any real issues. However, I do still have some advice for you. 

Overall, this looks really nice. Proportions look right, lighting is in all the right places, and it's all beautiful in a haunting sort of way. 

I'd like to focus on Red's hands for a bit. Her right hand is confusing me a bit. Normally, when posing, I like to try and mimic the position to check that anatomy is correct and the position is natural. I'm not entirely sure how her middle finger is doing that, but it can't be right. 

Now to the next hand! This is less of an anatomy thing and more of a consistency thing. She looks pretty on edge, yet her hand seems very relaxed holding the lantern. If I were scared, I'd be squeezing the heck outta that thing. Not a big deal, not even technically wrong. 

The eyes are by far my favourite part of this drawing. Maybe somehow you were just born with the gift of eye drawing, but I imagine it actually took a lot of work, and so I congratulate you. They look stunning and show emotion beautifully!

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mai-kuu [2014-11-07 19:04:42 +0000 UTC]

very Nice. I love your art toooo <3

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