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Falling-Pixie — Happily Never After
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Published: 2009-12-06 07:24:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Happily Never AfterOnce upon a time
There was a princess.
Her hair was tied in golden curls
With a silky satin ribbon.
She was perfect.
An unbroken vase
Made of pale porcelain
That held a bundle of buttercups.
She was in search for a prince,
Who would never come.
She dreamed of dark nights
Where a small mist kissed her skin
And the horse she rode trotted gently.
As she closed her eyes to dream
Of wonders across lands unknown
She was shut away from the world
In the arms of her prince.
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Comments: 3
Hi again, Cristina! Well, since I am the only one that is comment, even I can not to send such specialized critiques and youknow that my English is so basic, but I think that beinh this an open poem, it is good done; I like its topic, clasic, but you described it very good; I hope you like my critique, I want to know a bit more of the bakcground of this poem, my dear friend Falling Pixie.
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lol thats fine. thanks for the critique!
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