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Published: 2004-12-02 09:35:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Mixed up thoughts, want to write downConfused mind looking at the ground,
Two feet placed there, who's? My own?
How these feet seem to have grown,
Mind still young body mature
Sorting my head forevermore.
Through a glass I appear to gaze
My mind is still in complete haze,
Noting problems as I write-
Though never seem to gain a light,
Solutions are never clear-
Yet maybe sometimes a little near,
But still they stand out of my reach,
Problem solving you've yet to teach.
You're meant to be stable, meant to be strong
Conventions fail, you're weak and wrong.
Pushing loved ones further away,
Crying all night you sometimes lay.
Help me through this, end this pain,
For once be reliable, a mother and sain.
Help your Daughter, support your son-
Else you've lost them, no-one's won.
Comments: 10
pleasantlyinsane [2005-01-14 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]
i like that. I dont know how to explain it but there was something about it. :claps:
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dreamingfairy [2004-12-19 13:54:33 +0000 UTC]
perfect, man your so good at that! i think i have a competion!
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dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-06 13:14:14 +0000 UTC]
dont ask me, i forgot
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thekillingtree [2004-12-02 10:17:26 +0000 UTC]
thats really good emma, i reckons it it explains whats going on at home really well
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thekillingtree In reply to thekillingtree [2004-12-02 10:30:35 +0000 UTC]
yeah sure.. to me it does.
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FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2004-12-02 12:50:43 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, thanks, I don't think I expressed what I was feeling that well though, I just couldn't write it properly in a poem, so I wrote that.
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