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FallingFantasy — Final Judgement
Published: 2005-06-17 11:03:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I never want to feel again
whether they're in blood or pen
I'm feeling miles away
not far enough for today
Dragging my heavy feet
when comforts lost and out of reach
I hold the memories in my heart

Kill this pain
Drowning in music
Fallen in love
carrying a broken heart

Have you ever wanted to die?
To the one you love, ever lied?
You're drifting far away
further from me everyday
Cut me up and drag me down
Now i can't look myself in the mirror
Still I hold the memories in my heart

Kill this pain
Drowning in music
Fallen in love
carrying a broken heart

Wrapping chains around my heart
burn thessse ties, and so we part
I'm no further away
Not far enough to live each day
Regretting mistakes and living with pain
I find myself in a hall of mirrors
Dying, I hold the memories in my heart

Kill this pain
Drowning in music
Fallen in love
carrying a broken heart

I'd die for you....
And i'll die from this pain
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Comments: 20

Sarman [2005-07-26 06:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's touching. I really like this piece!
I'd like to read this listening to the music you had in mind when you have written it ...
... I'm sure it could be a great ... sad ... song. (I love sad songs )

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FallingFantasy In reply to Sarman [2005-07-26 17:54:24 +0000 UTC]

aww thankies lol
im afriad i have no idea what the music was though lol

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Sarman In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-07-29 14:28:20 +0000 UTC]

^^
anyway great piece!

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silverwolf71190 [2005-07-14 09:45:02 +0000 UTC]

I think It's a really good piece

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FallingFantasy In reply to silverwolf71190 [2005-07-17 12:43:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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silverwolf71190 In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-07-18 01:52:37 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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archeryking [2005-07-01 08:16:06 +0000 UTC]

What insired you 2 write this???

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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-07-09 13:13:33 +0000 UTC]

umm... it was how i was feeling at the time, its what i was experiencing

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darkdownthewell [2005-06-22 11:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Your really good at poems!

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FallingFantasy In reply to darkdownthewell [2005-06-23 14:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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darkdownthewell In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-07-04 13:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Thats ok hun

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pleasantlyinsane [2005-06-19 03:40:06 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It definately is a deep emotional song. My favourite lines:

Kill this pain
Drowning in music
Fallen in love
carrying a broken heart

It is not>/b> crappy at all.

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FallingFantasy In reply to pleasantlyinsane [2005-06-23 14:56:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you i wrote it when i was feeling kinda like shit, i couldn't move on from certain things/person, but i'm ok now. i've stopped hurting so much, i wouldn't have submitted it if i still felt like that.

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pleasantlyinsane In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-06-25 02:21:02 +0000 UTC]

yeh I understand what you mean. Sometimes I find that when I submit something, it sort of helps, even if I'm still feeling shittty about it, but if it's torn up by critique, then I remove it cause its too much to handle.
Again, it's a wonderfully written piece.

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FallingFantasy In reply to pleasantlyinsane [2005-06-28 10:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah thats what i think too. well thank you very much though ^_^

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Kung-fu-girl90 [2005-06-19 02:30:30 +0000 UTC]

thats very deep if it were made into a song, i'd listen to it everyday ^.^

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FallingFantasy In reply to Kung-fu-girl90 [2005-06-23 14:59:09 +0000 UTC]

thankies very much

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Kung-fu-girl90 In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-06-24 07:35:06 +0000 UTC]

ur always welcome ^.^

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soul-teaser [2005-06-17 17:22:51 +0000 UTC]

i dont know what to say.... its good. get someone to make it into a song

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FallingFantasy In reply to soul-teaser [2005-06-23 15:20:49 +0000 UTC]

hmmm thank you ^^

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