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FallingFantasy — Your Weakness
Published: 2005-03-18 15:54:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Your weakness…
Shouting and crying
You’re pathetic-
And dying.
So tragic-
In your pain,
No empathy-
Will you gain.
You’re wrong
You’re opposed,
So forlorn-
A dying rose.
It’s you I haunt,
So weak-
And gaunt,
You're frail
Drained life-
So pale,
Still has strife.
No respect
Have I,
Recollect-
Or I die.
Your fear-
Is me gone,
Shed a tear-
It's not too long.
It's you I taunt,
So weak-
And gaunt.
The answer you seek
... Is me.
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Comments: 6

soul-teaser [2005-03-19 14:57:27 +0000 UTC]

... pretty

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FallingFantasy In reply to soul-teaser [2005-03-21 16:03:35 +0000 UTC]

um thanks

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pleasantlyinsane [2005-03-19 08:20:40 +0000 UTC]

yeh i agree with ^ that up there. Makes it more powerful the way its to the point. It flows really well too..

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FallingFantasy In reply to pleasantlyinsane [2005-03-21 16:10:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Tear-Staind-Roses [2005-03-18 17:41:43 +0000 UTC]

i like it... i like the way you did it... it's kinda... short and to the point really... i like the way you rhymed it that way... nice job!

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FallingFantasy In reply to Tear-Staind-Roses [2005-03-21 16:09:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you
i was kinda on a short fuse

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