HOME | DD

FallingFantasy — Childlike comfort
Published: 2005-01-11 15:32:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 269; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 14
Redirect to original
Description On my bed you silently lie,
Providing comfort when I cry.
Whenever i'm alone, you're always there,
Though you are not capable of care.
Tipped over the edge you're the last resort,
Lying there immune, not capable of thought.
With you in my arms i'll sleep tonight,
Hoping you give my dreams some light.
Whenever I need you, you're always there,
My dumb thoughtless reliable little bear.
Related content

[ TEXT ]


FallingFantasy - Final Judgement

FallingFantasy - Me and my lil one

FallingFantasy - Reaching out for comfort

FallingFantasy - Your invitation
Comments: 45

soul-teaser [2005-01-28 23:01:21 +0000 UTC]

omg thats so sweet ^_^ the piccy goes so well with the poem!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to soul-teaser [2005-01-31 10:13:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ nicked it from lil pikey ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

thekillingtree [2005-01-28 15:29:47 +0000 UTC]

this poem is really cool it rymes and everything the ending is good too well done baby

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-01-28 15:36:54 +0000 UTC]

ok, i take that back, no you didnt

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-01-28 15:31:12 +0000 UTC]

err, you've allready commented on it. shows how much attention you paid to it when you read it *grrh* *sulks*
^^ still love you though

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pleasantlyinsane [2005-01-14 00:49:57 +0000 UTC]

i luv it There's a lot of people writing about teddies at the moment. I've got a teddy panda called Bamboo, maybe your teddy and my teddy could be friends But then the other teddies would get mighty jealous, maybe your teddy should meet all of them..
lol dont mind me im slightly insane haha. Anyway beautiful poem MAkes me wanna steal your special bear

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to pleasantlyinsane [2005-01-17 10:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Awww lol your so sweet yep i'm sure they would all be jealous but my bear would love to be friends with yours lol

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pleasantlyinsane In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-17 11:01:35 +0000 UTC]

good good It's a done deal

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to pleasantlyinsane [2005-01-17 11:06:25 +0000 UTC]

yep it is indeed ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

soul-teaser [2005-01-13 22:11:30 +0000 UTC]

its nice.. good idea about the teddy and stuff

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to soul-teaser [2005-01-17 10:35:30 +0000 UTC]

fankoos

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

dreamingfairy [2005-01-13 15:05:52 +0000 UTC]

hmm, maybe i should do that...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-17 10:29:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ maybe

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-17 13:13:30 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-17 13:43:11 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-18 13:22:50 +0000 UTC]

yay!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-18 13:24:08 +0000 UTC]

yeppers

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-18 13:24:37 +0000 UTC]

yes, and yayness and holy potatoes!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-18 13:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Holy potatoes? :convused:

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-19 10:33:32 +0000 UTC]

its a saying of mine in shock, like "wow, that is so good!" sorry if im immiture, its just me, lol!!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-19 10:35:27 +0000 UTC]

lol indeed. that's ok. potatoes rock. Yay for potatoes

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-19 13:12:21 +0000 UTC]

yes, but if you bow down to them, all you eat is potatoes, and you carve potatoes all day and you wash tem and you...well you get the drift, what about then? what are you going to do?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-19 13:17:55 +0000 UTC]

what am i going to do about what?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-19 13:22:20 +0000 UTC]

i dunno

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-19 13:26:38 +0000 UTC]

oh ok, that's drawn to a close then

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-20 15:39:56 +0000 UTC]

exactly, what do like?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-13 14:57:40 +0000 UTC]

uberly good ^_^
as that guy said the rhyme kinda jumps just a lil
tis cooote

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-17 10:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ and thanks for the fav

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ShadowHarlequin In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-17 13:38:08 +0000 UTC]

no pwoblems

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-17 13:47:33 +0000 UTC]

^^ aint seen you in ages ether. pikeys gone back this morning you dint say goodbye to him

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ShadowHarlequin In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-18 14:20:29 +0000 UTC]

awww sh** how come he didnt come in? merg

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-18 15:08:25 +0000 UTC]

He thought you knew that he was going, he dint think you were bothered.
there there

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ShadowHarlequin In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-18 19:17:05 +0000 UTC]

aww balls

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-19 10:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Yep

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ShadowHarlequin In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-19 10:46:28 +0000 UTC]

awww

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to ShadowHarlequin [2005-01-19 12:06:22 +0000 UTC]

fankoos

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ShadowHarlequin In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-19 12:16:17 +0000 UTC]

no probs

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

h3nza [2005-01-11 20:56:21 +0000 UTC]

nice, its got a jumpy tune to it and it flows well. i expecially like the first two lines, really sets the scene [if u can call it that] for the rest of the poem.

5 stars

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to h3nza [2005-01-13 09:33:51 +0000 UTC]

why thanks.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

emotionless-clones [2005-01-11 15:34:19 +0000 UTC]

AW, beautiful.
+FAV!!!
Kayla

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to emotionless-clones [2005-01-11 15:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

emotionless-clones In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-11 15:37:37 +0000 UTC]

it's all good honey. Keep it up. I love your poems!!!
Kayla

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FallingFantasy In reply to emotionless-clones [2005-01-11 15:38:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

FallingFantasy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-13 09:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Yayness!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

emotionless-clones In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-11 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

that's ok! You're talented!
Kayla

👍: 0 ⏩: 0