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FallingFantasy — Home truths
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Published: 2005-02-24 09:32:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 27
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Till death do us partYou fucking whore,
Happy thou art
As you're counting the score.
Each cut has a reason,
Cos it's everything but you!
I draw to your attention-
What I say to you is true;
I screwed up
I fucked up
Arn't you just so proud?
After all it's all your great work,
I'm praising you so loud!
Bleeding was the only thing left
And my poems, they were mine.
Yeah cos this is all just a fucking test-
Till God gives us a sign!
Can you hear my blood drip?
My bitter sweet cure,
As the glass makes my skin rip,
The empty feeling has its lure.
You drive me insane
You are insane.
Unconditional love graces,
But hate has left its mark,
You can't remove the traces...
... And so we part.
Comments: 44
oooh thats amazoin. i really like it... good rhyming n everything.
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Thank you,
aww and thank you for the
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no worries, it was worth it...
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bleh *hugs tight* its not really my place to say anything, so all ill say is hold on, and i know its shit, but ignore her.. or try. and less of the silly stuff. its NOT the way to go
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thank you for the hug.
I do try to ignore her
o well *sigh*
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*hugs more* itll be ok, please dont do silleh things. theres always someone to talk to ok?
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aww thank you
i know.....
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well dont do it then silleh ^^ 
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*grrh* me dont like pokings
thank you
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stoopid moo
*sigh*
but you wrote that fuking amazingly 
rhyme and rhythm were great
me uber likes
hore = whore btw
and also put explicit content in teh description
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awwww thank you
yeah me crap spelling lol
ok i'll change it. thank you for the
i wont see you much now that you can't come into school
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i know! grr! and, now i dont like dropping out anymore
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aww 
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yeah they were 
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yeah they were
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er... ok... lol so do you like it then?
thanks
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yeah... it sort of shockd me but it did say explisit cotent
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omfg! that is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo great!!!!!!!!!! dude i luv this poem!!! this is going to my favs
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o wow,
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wow emma i didnt know you felt like that... when did you write this?
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what do you mean "wow"
i wrote it last fucking night
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why are you sorry?
and what did you man "wow"?
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wow its good poem wise thast all i ment gezz and im sorry coz i thought you were in a mood with me.
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oh, ok.... thanks....
and i'm not in a mood with you....
just myself...
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dont be you have no reason tobe its your mum
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Yeah, well i'm the one that's fucked up this time, my maths and english (mrs price-not the other one) teachers thought that there wasn't any point n me carrying on. i used to get good grades, i aint used to doing shit, i'm struggling and that's never happened to me before. i feel like shit.
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ok continue in the notes yeah?
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yeah by the way thnaks for commenting on my work
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that was like the biggest hint ever and you still didnt comment 
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