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FallingFantasy — Two poems
Published: 2004-12-17 15:01:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Life's sweet fantasy
Comes crashing down
Falling till it hits the ground
Send it soaring
Or keep it safe
Wherever you choose
It'll be a better place



(other poem)



My sweet angel
Young, so deluded
Oblivious to inflicting pain
Naive and hers-
Yet for how long?
Fly away Angel-
Spread those wings
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Comments: 12

Tear-Staind-Roses [2004-12-27 20:52:23 +0000 UTC]

nice poems...i like 'em both! nice job

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FallingFantasy In reply to Tear-Staind-Roses [2005-01-06 09:43:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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silverwolf71190 [2004-12-21 14:07:52 +0000 UTC]

cooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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FallingFantasy In reply to silverwolf71190 [2005-01-06 09:42:25 +0000 UTC]

lol

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dreamingfairy [2004-12-19 13:37:32 +0000 UTC]

i love both

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FallingFantasy In reply to dreamingfairy [2005-01-06 09:36:13 +0000 UTC]

^^ LOL

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FallingFantasy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-06 14:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Yep yep

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dreamingfairy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-06 13:14:56 +0000 UTC]

^_^yayness

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h3nza [2004-12-17 15:47:30 +0000 UTC]

first > despite the not so light and good mood the first poem has, to me it is very playfull bounch and cheerfull. very good work, you managed to put a happy take on a sad image.

second > hmm, i dont have much to say about this one... i like it, but its hard to explain why

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FallingFantasy In reply to h3nza [2005-01-06 09:32:19 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you, I appretiate your comments

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FallingFantasy In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-11 15:06:23 +0000 UTC]

^^

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h3nza In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-01-11 11:17:55 +0000 UTC]

no worries

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