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Published: 2005-02-09 12:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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You can't save meI'm lost to you,
The life she gave me
She didn't intentionally do;
Set myself free
Break these ties,
You still can't see
How she tries,
Clining on tight,
A guilty mind
This isn't right
Can't leave her behind.
Cut me up
Bring me down
Sorrowfully drowning,
Destroy my life,
Remove the traces,
So young
Dying high
From your bitter love.
Comments: 26
FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-02-09 14:32:14 +0000 UTC]
Why are you sorry?
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thekillingtree In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-09 22:40:40 +0000 UTC]
is it about me? coz it sounds like its about me
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FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-02-10 09:37:09 +0000 UTC]
Well, yeah i guess it's a little about you, but the 'bitter love' is mum's love for me. i dint intentionally write it about you, but yeah i guess it kinda is too.
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FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-02-10 09:35:32 +0000 UTC]
Well, yeah i guess it's a little about you, but the 'bitter love' is mum's love for me. i dint intentionally write it about you, but yeah i guess it kinda is too.
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thekillingtree In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-10 09:37:28 +0000 UTC]
yeah about me always going on at you about the situation whe you cant change it .... im sorry
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FallingFantasy In reply to thekillingtree [2005-02-10 09:43:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, i honestly dint realise i was meaning that when i wrote it
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archeryking [2005-02-09 13:07:45 +0000 UTC]
I like it. i think it would make quite a good song if it were longer.
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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-02-09 13:41:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, i was kinda writing it as a song, but then i dint know what else to write so i just left it like this.
Thanks
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-09 15:27:34 +0000 UTC]
you should keep going, send it off to a publisher, and they might give it to a band. if that happened, you would get LOADS of cash! ( if it sounds a little crazy, its cos i am!!)
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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-02-09 15:29:53 +0000 UTC]
lol yeah it does sound crazy, cos it aint really that good. nice thought though
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-09 15:32:28 +0000 UTC]
i av these crazy thoughts every now and agen, but i usually dont try them, but i did try sumic da uver day. I tried running away from home. i was gr8 till the pigs cought me! im so stupid.
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-09 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, i even confuse my self!
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-09 15:39:11 +0000 UTC]
yeah. for example i think of realkly stupid stuf like why a kettl is called a kettl. i get iunto really deep thought and then confuse myself cos i think to hard.
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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-02-10 09:26:09 +0000 UTC]
lol yeah, I know what you mean
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-10 10:30:44 +0000 UTC]
do ya? do ya really?? if you do your the first!!!
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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-02-10 10:45:40 +0000 UTC]
Yay i'm the 1st in something lol
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archeryking In reply to FallingFantasy [2005-02-11 12:50:31 +0000 UTC]
i read that and burst into hysterrics! i thought that smilie meant "spaztic".lol
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FallingFantasy In reply to archeryking [2005-02-11 13:57:26 +0000 UTC]
^^ did people look at you?
you're so silleh
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