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I was a little disappointed with the lack of tears and hugging after the death of Hawke's mom, so I made my own sappy comicAnyways. It's finally done (after some panic over a lost tablet pen...) and now... Yeah.
Edit: Why does the lighting suddenly look so orange? On my desktop it looks nice... On my laptop it's just hard to look at :\ I guess that's the disadvantage with digital art.
Fenris and some of the dialogue belongs to Bioware.
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Comments: 51
CiraChan [2013-09-10 09:04:54 +0000 UTC]
I too was a little disappointed with the lack of tears. I really thought my good hawke who loved her mother would have been just sobbing. But no, nothing.
This captivates the feeling I personally feel was meant to be portrayed at that moment <3 lovely art.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to CiraChan [2013-09-10 16:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I think most people felt that the post All That Remain scenes were insufficient. It's really too bad, because that was such a traumatic quest
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CiraChan In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2013-09-10 21:27:22 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree. because there was just such lack of emotions. honestly there could have been several ways each Hawke dealt with the emotional pain. Such as the angry one smashing stuff and the sarcastic one perhaps being drunk and sad...just random ideas off the top my head.
but I really do feel there was so much emotional depth that was missed.
And you're welcome once again~
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IceQueenofMitera [2013-09-10 04:22:08 +0000 UTC]
This should have been in the game!
I think the only one that acted accordingly was Gamlen when he started yelling and blaming Hawke for Leandra's death. All of the LI comments were rigid.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to IceQueenofMitera [2013-09-10 04:39:31 +0000 UTC]
I agree completely. Though I wish you could yell back. I think it would've been therapeutic for my Hawke
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IceQueenofMitera In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2013-09-10 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]
Mine too. Even though she's used to getting yelled at by her family...
I think when I get to that part on my fic, she will yell at Gamlen
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to IceQueenofMitera [2013-09-10 07:01:19 +0000 UTC]
Can I let you in on a little secret? I *might* have sketched out a 15 page comic about the "All That Remains" quest, and my Hawke definitely yells at Gamlen... and everyone else in her party. My Hawke's uses sarcasm to cover up distress, so she's got a lot of it bottled up and her mother's death is enough to make her snap a bit
It'll take me forever to finish though, so I don't really want to tell a lot of people in case I get irritated and decide to scrap it...
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IceQueenofMitera In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2013-09-10 14:55:45 +0000 UTC]
I bet that will be awesome
My Hawke is a sarcastic smartass too
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hobbithase [2013-09-01 11:20:47 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree with you. that scene missed some emotions in the game also where hawke gets to know about the white lilies and that their mother was missed. I mean who would say: "let the guards search for her." when you're a powerful warrior like hawke? it was like "let that old hag do, whatever she wants! she's coming back for sure." what a lovely family...
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to hobbithase [2013-09-02 01:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Mmhm. I have a feeling Hawke would be much more assertive if her mother was missing.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to Lilithblack [2013-09-01 05:56:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! I- I'm so flattered! You're definitely one of my favorite artists ever!
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to TinyOtaku99 [2013-07-29 14:48:37 +0000 UTC]
I knowww! I started a new playthrough a couple weeks ago, and the only quest I have left in Act 2 is All that Remains... I've been avoiding my xbox all week
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EternoAprendiz [2012-10-11 19:49:08 +0000 UTC]
That is a very traumatizating game you have there...
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TheAshenDirewolf [2012-01-11 00:07:52 +0000 UTC]
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute!! I wish that would happen in the game!!!!! Daaaaaaaaaaaaaawww!!
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to TheAshenDirewolf [2012-01-11 16:38:52 +0000 UTC]
Ha! Thank you ^^
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RedwallChick1303 [2011-12-24 06:05:36 +0000 UTC]
This is such a sweet comic! I think this should've been in the game! Or at least whoever likes you the most at the time, know what I'm saying? And I like sappiness too! Sometimes I think I'm too sappy I really like this. It's sweet, well-drawn, and should've been put in the game. Fenris is so cute!
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to RedwallChick1303 [2011-12-26 00:11:53 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thanks! And, yes, they definitely needed at least a little more sappiness in the game
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RedwallChick1303 In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2012-01-11 03:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Lol, people and the seriousness in their games, am i right?? lol
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tamarialovestechumsa [2011-12-06 01:33:18 +0000 UTC]
you aren't alone in the "i want more sappy parts" club. i'm a member too.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to tamarialovestechumsa [2011-12-06 06:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Ha! We should definitely create a club like that
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IceQueenofMitera In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2013-09-10 04:19:35 +0000 UTC]
I'll join that club lol
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jandwivey [2011-12-05 21:16:44 +0000 UTC]
you are a reader of minds! this is one scene that i think bioware failed BIG TIME. i have had this scene, rewritten in my mind, for months... i'm just trying to get to the point in my story where i can finally use it.
im a fan of this.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to jandwivey [2011-12-05 21:44:11 +0000 UTC]
I agree! The dialogue in the scene was so... lacking. I've watched the other LI comments, and none of them seem very supportive. Poor Hawke.
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Corvida-Margareth [2011-11-28 23:04:45 +0000 UTC]
YES! We need more hugging and crying! Come on, Origins was pretty much a waterworks, at least it would have been if the animation weren't so cumbersome.
Thanks for this, it's adorable!
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to Corvida-Margareth [2011-11-29 17:55:20 +0000 UTC]
Origins was most definitely a waterworks!
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JdsPrincess [2011-10-24 01:02:37 +0000 UTC]
I agree... I wish that there had been a scene like this after Leandra's death.
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to JdsPrincess [2011-10-24 14:05:30 +0000 UTC]
It was too... I don't even know. It just wasn't the way you talk to someone when they've lost a parent (not that I would know)
Gosh, Fen, learn some social skills
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JdsPrincess In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2011-10-24 20:41:30 +0000 UTC]
You are so right! XD
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Webyy [2011-10-23 20:19:57 +0000 UTC]
It's really sad (and cute) : )
Just wanted to say that I think you made a little mistake on the fourth bubble, when she says "First Da, then Beth" I think you meant "dad" x) But it's not horrible, we can still understand. ^^
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to Webyy [2011-10-23 21:06:07 +0000 UTC]
Aw. Thanks.
That actually wasn't a mistake... I read a fic once where Hawke referred to her father as "Da" and I thought it was cute, so now in my head canon that's what Hawke calls her Dad
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Webyy In reply to Fastforwardmotion [2011-10-24 00:59:25 +0000 UTC]
xD Oh, I see. Well, when I first read I thought Hawke was talking about Dragon Age (DA), so it's just me who is to deaf xD
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to Webyy [2011-10-24 14:05:57 +0000 UTC]
Ha! I didn't even think of that
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Fastforwardmotion In reply to BuildMyPaperHeart [2011-10-23 16:56:11 +0000 UTC]
Hugging is the best comfort... Just sayin'
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