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Description Exilm's Story…
Written by infintedreams07

My name is Meli… or attest it was before I become a nobody and joined Organization Twilight… Well then if you would like to hear about how I became how I am today pull up a chair and listen clearly because I'm only going to re tell this once…
It was a breezy afternoon in Kilika a small village by the ocean on the planet of Spria. It was the day I  was to solve the Cloister of Trials and become a summoner. Walking though the halls with my four guardians whose names have become lost in the wind to me. I finally came to the room were the aeon rested that I would make my own, one of many I would collect on my pilgrimage across Spria. I was to acquire Ifrit, the Fire Aeon. Making a pact with this mighty beast I waved my staff in air around me and the aeon heard my call. "I deem you worthy becoming a summoner. Please let me offer my power to you." The great aeon bellowed. The aeon reached out its fiery claw to me and began materializing into my staff. But something was wrong. The air from this aeon was too strong to bare. Normally a summoner could complete a pact with an aeon just fine if it excepted them but it felt like this aeon was possessed somehow. The aeon took its claw and ripped me apart leaving me to fall into a pool of my own blood.  I cried but some how I could shed a tear.  Then  felt it consume my entire being until all I could see was darkness.
Lying in the darkness I felt overwhelmed and scared and not able to fell and emotion of it all. I couldn't take it anymore… The feeling of nothingness was driving my insane. All of the sudden a faint light appeared around me and a I heard a voice. "You don't have to be afraid anymore. We will show you the way." I felt a hand pull me out of the darkness and into the moonlight.
Opening my eyes I saw a beach with a glittering ocean. I walked up to the water to look at my reflection. "What have I become!" I screamed. My once brown hair was now a raspberry pink in the same hair style as before and I felt that all my powers of a summoner had been drained from me. Clothed in nothing but a dark pink strapless dress I felt it strange how I couldn't feel the cold breeze warring less then I was before.  A tall figure stood before and held out his hand. handing me a black cloak. He used some kind of magic to  show me the letters in my name and he  switched around to create a new name. "Welcome to Organization Twilight Exilm."
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Comments: 13

siegio [2010-04-25 08:38:31 +0000 UTC]

wow, it ripped her apart? ouch... DX

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Run-Away-Demyx [2010-04-18 21:38:53 +0000 UTC]

i love it!! ^^ not only is it descriptive and full of images, but it's also really gripping.
I want to learn more about your character!!!!

my characters Xaell in Org-Twilight XD
hope to see more of your stuff soon

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fataleflare In reply to Run-Away-Demyx [2010-04-18 21:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much hun! I'm working on my twilight town outfit so I'll write more about her in that mission.

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Run-Away-Demyx In reply to fataleflare [2010-04-19 12:54:49 +0000 UTC]

that sounds cool!!

definitely an original idea!! ^^

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Sofy202 [2010-04-18 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]

this was very interesting....I want to read more things of her X3

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fataleflare In reply to Sofy202 [2010-04-18 18:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Sofy202 In reply to fataleflare [2010-04-20 20:40:50 +0000 UTC]

u welcome X3

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ShangXiang6 [2010-04-18 16:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Really cool! This was quite interesting, I want to see more

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fataleflare In reply to ShangXiang6 [2010-04-18 18:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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ShangXiang6 In reply to fataleflare [2010-04-18 19:52:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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dead-jellyfish [2010-04-18 10:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I like it :3
So is this world Spria an actual world from a movie or something, or did you just think it up?

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fataleflare In reply to dead-jellyfish [2010-04-18 10:47:18 +0000 UTC]

No its a world from Final Fantasy 10.

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dead-jellyfish In reply to fataleflare [2010-04-18 10:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh... okay >_>; I knew that *cough*
I'm actually not too familiar with Final Fantasy stuff lol

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