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ashiinu In reply to KoboldPrincess [2018-08-07 01:46:06 +0000 UTC]

woah jesus christ dude thats not how you do critique

and no its not lmao the composition is amazing

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KoboldPrincess In reply to ashiinu [2018-08-07 01:54:05 +0000 UTC]

The composition is objectively poor. It is disappointing to try and follow the action for the first time. it looks like the fox is behind him due to the only thing deciding the first panel and the set of other panels is a tree. 

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ashiinu In reply to KoboldPrincess [2018-08-07 01:57:48 +0000 UTC]

im sorry you need giant black lines to break panels instead of being able to appreciate a brilliant aesthetic transition that makes the comic flow very fluidly

you should really keep these kinds of comments to yourself, it isnt your commission and the artist didn't ask for critique

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KoboldPrincess In reply to ashiinu [2018-08-07 02:01:19 +0000 UTC]

You should keep the passive aggressive crap to yourself. if you don't have anything productive to say maybe take your own advice. 

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ashiinu In reply to KoboldPrincess [2018-08-07 02:02:20 +0000 UTC]

there's nothing passive about my aggression

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SnappleMon In reply to KoboldPrincess [2018-08-07 01:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Maybe the composition is good and you're just bad a reading ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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KoboldPrincess In reply to SnappleMon [2018-08-07 02:02:32 +0000 UTC]

I am pretty good at reading, this is just bad, no matter how artistic it may be. 

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FalloutCoyote In reply to KoboldPrincess [2018-08-07 03:22:51 +0000 UTC]

I commissioned this and I disagree, the composition is fine. Please take your negativity and your "objective" feedback on a long walk off a short pier.

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TheVandesh In reply to FalloutCoyote [2018-08-08 02:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, there's no need to be rude and post a borderline threat. Of course art is all in perspective, and of course it's readable, it can be displayed and shown MUCH better. Kobold posted her opinion in a very respectful manner, and she got attacked. Even now, she's still been pretty nice. She didn't deserve that.

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FalloutCoyote In reply to TheVandesh [2018-08-08 04:00:57 +0000 UTC]

There is offering constructive critique and there is being overly negative and asserting your opinion as fact. Since she chose the latter of the two I responded in kind, and I'm not sure how you misconstrued an old-timey insult that basically means please go jump in a lake to be a borderline threat, but that is all it means. 

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KoboldPrincess In reply to FalloutCoyote [2018-08-07 03:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Now that is just rude

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