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new art is made.I just couldn't ruin my story with that crappy art. ;A; so I made a full drawing with shading, details and even a bg? oml, I haven't done a bg in years! D: I really want that chara ok I'm sorry.
that grass took ages oml what have I done..
old art: Rnrcontest
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Story:
Roamer dropped the knife to the cold ground. The wind was howling, trees where whispering and the beast was dead. With legs shaking he looked around. Where was she? Was she alright?
He called out for her into the wind, all he could hear was the silence and the smell of death. He saw a shadow trough the trees. He trembled forth, it was her.
He felt glad to see her, but then he came closer. He got swept over by fear as the fresh scent of blood filled his nostrils.
"Roamer.." Her voice got swept away by the wind and she fell to the ground.
"Ronja!" He ran to her, catching her fall. "No, no no.. Stay with me!" He cried out as his eyes became misty and blurred his view. "You’re going to be alright, let me just-" He started in panic to think of a way to save her.
"Roamer I-" She struggled to talk. "I never got to tell you.."
"Please, save your breath. We need to get the others!" As he prepared to howl for help, Ronja stopped him with a bloody shaking paw to his chest.
"It’s to no use." She felt the blood rising within, beginning to blind her from seeing his glimmering silver eyes. "Roamer I-" Her sight turned black and she felt cold as her blood poured out from her open wound. "I love you." Roamer let tears fall down his cheeks and drip to the cold frozen ground.
"I know Sweetnose, I know." He put his nose next to hers. "I always knew." Ronja forced one last smile.
"Of course you did, you idiot." She whispered with her last breath. Her eyes staled and her heart got silent, still and cold. Roamer was scared. How could he have let this happen to her? Why her, why now. With frustration and anger he let out a crying howl, filling the woods with his sorrow and despair.
She was gone, and his soul went down with her.
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contest entry for
He will stay dead in the comic, but a new owner can bring him back to life.
The winner will recieve a full body drawing of him with his complete design.
I will judge on creativity, detail and effort.
About:
Create a drawing or write a story about one particular thing you hope to see in the comic. You may make multiple entries but each entry must depict one specific theme. A list of things you want will not be counted as an entry.
It could be anything! An epic fight, puppies from your favorite characters, two characters falling inlove, a mythical creature etc etc.
Rules
Post your entries in your gallery.
Traditional or digital drawings allowed.
Art- All art must be your own. Minimal textures allowed but no premade linearts. Add a short description explaining why you chose that theme.
Literature-minimum of 300 words.
More than one entry allowed. You can also combine art and literature into one entry but the story must
aaahh I really want that handsome dogge. :'D oml he's so cool <3
characters belons to Kique7
art is made by me.
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Comments: 29
Fellefan In reply to equine1011 [2016-04-01 04:26:13 +0000 UTC]
oh I really wish! thank you~
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Texas-Red-Wolf [2016-03-29 00:08:39 +0000 UTC]
sad story. this one is fir him. m.youtube.com/watch?v=flLxVHYK…
Also here's my entry you can read it if you want to.
texas-red-wolf.deviantart.com/…
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Fellefan In reply to Texas-Red-Wolf [2016-03-29 00:12:02 +0000 UTC]
aah imagine dragons :'D <33
odamn that's long ;o; I'll see if I get the time to read it~
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Texas-Red-Wolf In reply to Fellefan [2016-03-29 00:55:47 +0000 UTC]
okay *bows* you enjoy it when you have the time.
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corruptangel315 [2016-03-26 02:05:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. This is heartbreaking. I literally had tears in my eyes as I read it. But that's a good thing; despite being sad, it's a good little story. Well-written, and so touching. I could actually picture this happening too. 3 Good luck in the contest!
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Fellefan In reply to corruptangel315 [2016-03-26 03:29:42 +0000 UTC]
awh, thank you a lot! :'D <3
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Fellefan In reply to Ferahs [2016-03-21 07:33:56 +0000 UTC]
awh you think so? :'D I'd be so happy for sure!
thank you <3
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Ferahs In reply to Fellefan [2016-03-21 14:33:01 +0000 UTC]
Of course, it's the best story that was uploaded ;o;
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Fellefan In reply to Ferahs [2016-03-21 14:48:20 +0000 UTC]
aahh oml thank youu ;A; that means a lot to hear <3356
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Traue-Niemand [2016-03-20 20:48:09 +0000 UTC]
The story is very pretty. I cried...
But do I get it right, you want to see Ronja die? =/
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Fellefan In reply to Traue-Niemand [2016-03-20 21:06:23 +0000 UTC]
awh, thank you! :'D
well it sounds cruel when you say it like that.. xD but yes, I do. don't get me wrong, I love ronja! but it'd be such a good twist is she ended up dead. ;u; hah, I'm such a monster!
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NEvans-91 [2016-03-20 19:07:26 +0000 UTC]
”Roamer..” She falls to the ground.
”Ronja!” He ran to her, catching her fall. “No, no.. Stay with me!” He cries as his eyes become misty and blurs his view.
“Roamer I-“ She struggles to talk. “I never got to tell you..”
“Please, save your breath. We need to get help!” As he prepared to howl for help, Ronja stopped him with a bloody shaking paw to his chest.
“It’s to no use.” She felt the blood rising within, beginning to blind her from seeing his glimmering silver eyes. “ Roamer.. I- love you..”
“I know, sweetnose, I know..” As he felt her last breath he let out a crying howl, filling the woods with sorrow and despair.
The story here is that she suffers a fatal wound somewhere after a battle, and only then realizes she needs to tell him before it’s too late.
For me this would make a heartbreaking twist in their romance. As I love blood and to see my loved characters suffer, this is probably the most horrible thing I could think of, Ronja dying “in Roamer’s arms”. It’d be so sad and so memorable.
all of this equates 218 words,
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Fellefan In reply to NEvans-91 [2016-03-20 19:16:19 +0000 UTC]
oh alright, so it just needs to be a little bit longer! thank you ;u;
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Fellefan In reply to NEvans-91 [2016-03-20 20:26:10 +0000 UTC]
I updated my story, do you think it's enough now? ;u;
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Fellefan In reply to NEvans-91 [2016-03-20 21:33:01 +0000 UTC]
great! :'D thank you very much <3
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Woofies2003 [2016-03-20 18:02:17 +0000 UTC]
ahah your dogs look more real than mine, this is cute yet sad :'D
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Woofies2003 In reply to Fellefan [2016-03-20 18:11:54 +0000 UTC]
ya :3 (lol seeing this i think my image is gonna fail)
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Fellefan In reply to Woofies2003 [2016-03-20 18:13:50 +0000 UTC]
oh shut it! D:< I entered with the story, not the art! ;u; the art is just an extra~
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Fellefan In reply to Woofies2003 [2016-03-20 19:01:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you! ;u; and to you as well~<3
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