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Well, this took longer then expected. O.0
There’s a few things I’m not too happy about in this page but what else is new.
Hmmm . . . I actually know where I’m going with this!! Whoo hoo!! Just some tiny details to make and I’m cooking.
Shadow, Yolanta, Comic & Art (c) Me and me only!
No stealing!!
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Very nice. I like this page in general. 
Also, love the last three panels on this page -- the conversation between Shadow and Yolanta is dramatic, but... not dramatic. I dunno. xD But I like it.
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Thanks. I noticed tha too except I'm still trying to get 'a way of drawing the background', that I like. ^^
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Umm . . . the warriors will be mentioned in the comic, but Shadow, Yolanta and any one else will not have much interaction with them. So, I guess no. But warriors will appear for a little bit in a few pages. ^^
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awesome I know it just sounded kinda like warriors
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Yup. They've been walking for a while now.
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Shadow has every right to be on her feet all the time, but Yolanta feels kinda gullible since Dauskk just LOOKS evil-ish. I mean, it's not so badly obvious like in BBA. But I do have a small question:
Why do your cats have bizzare fur colors?
~Snuffie
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Heh heh thanks. I just hope i don't start sucking later on.
I was waiting for someone to ask me that since I've been asking myself the same question. I have to start drawing more kitties and animals with fairly normal pelts. Still, it's a bit fun making some chars a bit bizarre looking.
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Well, they can be fun to look at, I'll give you that, but for a serious comic, usually colorful kitties put it off. Just a small suggestion. ^_^
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The expressions of the characters are really good, eh. I love it!
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Thank yous! I'm glad you like it!
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It's nice. ^^
I've always wondered what the heck a moon was. 'Moon..last night?'
I can't wait for the next page.
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Thank you. Yeah, it took me a while to figure it out as well. ^^ I've heard a few different answers as well but I just stuck with two months. ^^
Thanks again.
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What Yolanta and Shadow say in the last two panels is just awesome for some reason. :3
Awww. The birdies aren't attacking each other this time. D:
xD
Nice job!
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I liked those two quotes as well. ^^ Although, I also don't know why. o.0 Strannnggge . . . .
Yup, they're at peace, for now. Mhahahahahaha!!! >.<
Thanks!
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I FUCKING LOVE IT.
Especialy the 5th panel. BD
I love how you shade, its just sooo cool~!
I can't wait to see page 6!!
Weeh~
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Yees!! I'm glad you like it.
I'm not going to promise anything about the 6th page because I always think I can finish it quickly, but then it takes me weeks to get it up. Soo yeah, I hope you got an amazing patience.
Thanks btw!!
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