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Yes I am freakin' lazy, no need to tell me that. Could have worked harder on this but chose not to. I wanted to get the first page up now cause I need to get back to concentrating on school work, so I don't know when I'll get the next page up. Hopefully this week since it's already scanned, just need to do the photoshop bit...

Closet Perv's there cause we all know he reads Jaraiya's books in private

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This is gonna be a (fairly) short doujinshi based on events in the manga now (so if you're not up to date, don't continue reading this and it'd probably be best not to follow the doujinshi either...).

Lately I've been worried that Jaraiya will die (love his character in all his pervertedness! T_T ) so I came up with this idea about if he did. It's also meant for me to practice using my tablet (which I haven't used more than 10 times and I really ought to get crackin' with it...) and also practicing drawing Naruto characters cause until I've drawn them at least once from reference, I don't stand a chance of recreating them from memory. Take this page for example, this is my first time drawing all the characters here except Naruto from reference.

Discouraging critiques cause I want people who critique to have read this first. I WANT critiques if they're about the style I used. For example, if you think I should have coloured something different or should use more shading. I DON'T want critiques about the specific drawing however. Comments like 'his eyes are a bit off' or 'the anatomy's off' I don't really want to hear. In almost all cases, I probably already know - I have an eye to catch these things but I tend to have an inability to fix it properly or else I don't spend enough time on it. Either way, I don't really care to get that sort of criticism on a practice drawing like this. But I'm all for making my doujinshi style better since this is my first shot at one.

And yes, I know I'm probably butchering Japanese traditions in this. There will be plenty more butcherings in the future too, with my lack of knowledge on Japanese culture.

Now, for this doujinshi, there will be drinking and nudity, but nothing above what Kishimoto has put in the actual manga. If you read the manga, then you'll be fine. It will be NaruSaku (so anyone who doesn't like it can get out now X3) and a poke towards TsunadexJaraiya.

Now, for anyone who's actually read this far... er... I have nothing for you... Um... Have a cookie? :3

Naruto (c) Kishimoto
Tribute (c) Me
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Comments: 22

albertxlailaxx [2008-04-08 22:47:47 +0000 UTC]

And no even Jiraya...I saw when he died...he said such nice things about Naruto befor he died...wahhhhhhhhhhhh!

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albertxlailaxx [2008-04-08 22:46:58 +0000 UTC]

omg this happens right?!Sasuke fdies when Itachi does...[crying]

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mastersengan [2008-02-07 04:42:25 +0000 UTC]

why don't cha draw some tears on tsunade after all she loves jiraiya

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FeyPhantom In reply to mastersengan [2008-02-07 05:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Tsunade will have her moment later in the doujin, but for now at the public ceremony, she's the Hokage and shouldn't be appearing too 'weak'. Also, at this point she's in a pain too extreme for tears.

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mastersengan In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-02-07 06:36:19 +0000 UTC]

right, but wuld ya plzzzz hurry up!??

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FeyPhantom In reply to mastersengan [2008-02-10 02:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Please don't ask me to rush. It is midterm season for me and I have been doing schoolwork for more than 16 hours a day recently. I usually post images as soon as I can. Just realize that I have a busy life outside of dA and fandoms.

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mastersengan In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-02-10 05:41:26 +0000 UTC]

oh I see well then good luck wit yer schoolwork then

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FeyPhantom In reply to mastersengan [2008-02-10 06:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ryuspearhead [2007-12-15 04:44:19 +0000 UTC]

this is sadder now that its real

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FeyPhantom In reply to ryuspearhead [2008-01-05 23:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, unfortunately it came true. But I guess it had to happen...

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Sanin2 [2007-11-04 18:48:24 +0000 UTC]

I wish i could draw like that, can't draw to save my life compared to you. I like your style, really wish i had some program that you have.

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FeyPhantom In reply to Sanin2 [2007-11-04 22:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, just keep practicing and I assure you you'll get better Afterall, I'm still learning too. And I use Photoshop 7.0 and an Intuos 3 Wacom Graphics Tablet. But it's not all about the programs used. I know someone who does amazing artwork using Paint, so really, just become an expert with what you have and create your own style ^_^ And most importantly, have fun!

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SabakuNoMay [2007-10-30 14:12:01 +0000 UTC]

T_T jiraijaaaaa!!
this is awesome but I hope Jiraija donΒ΄t die!! T_T

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FeyPhantom In reply to SabakuNoMay [2007-10-30 16:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And I hope he doesn't die too. Love his character way too much

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ciarda927 [2007-10-29 04:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, worried about Jiraiya dying too. The only things that make me think that he might not die is Kishimoto didn't quite kill Orochimaru, Pein is going a bit too much on the "evil overlord" behavior, and in the latest chapter Jiraiya saying he hadn't learned how to do the transformation on his own yet. I think there's a possibility he might live, get hurt really bad, maybe be on the edge of life or death, but survive. I'm thinking his toad teachers will die though. And certainly having to kill Pein and Conan will tear him up emotionally. He won't be the same guy after this. He was already hinting that he was getting tired of playing his ero senin role and wanted to become a more serious role model for the rising generation. I think that might be Kishimoto's foreshadowing. He apparently was capable of being that way with Pein, Conan and Yahko, and with Minato's group. Naruto's slowly been drawing him back to that person and Tsunade's tolerance of his perverted nature, and occassional hints of attraction has probably also had an effect on him. (He'll always be perverted, I'm sure, but he'll let the other sides of his personality show more in the future- if he survives, and I hope he does.)

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FeyPhantom In reply to ciarda927 [2007-10-30 16:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Problem is I really don't see Pain dying just yet... There's been foreshadowing of him going up against Naruto and supposedly these eyes are supposed to be really powerful and seem important somehow in the series. It would be too soon to kill off his character. Of course, it might be possible that Jaraiya escapes somehow, still badly injured, but that's really as far as my hope extends The way I've seen all that foreshadowing of Jaraiya's though leads me to think this is his last fight - He's said his goodbyes to Tsunade, commented that the only thing he can do now is help the younger generation, given the 'key' to Naruto if he doesn't return from this, and is now using his 'ultimate' mode. Even if he can't do it on his own, when characters use their strongest moves, it can mean that they're about to be killed off so 'all the stops' are taken out and we get to see the extent of their power before they die.

Admittantly, I really hope I'm reading too much into it...

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trueno-uzumaki [2007-10-28 21:05:20 +0000 UTC]

hhaha wiiih!!!
join the club today *-* XDD

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CookyMunster [2007-10-28 18:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I don't want Jiraiya to die either.
But he already had like 3 flashbacks
and that is essential for a dying character in Naruto D:

I like the style in how you drew it.
Tsunade looks a bit weird cause' of the broken lines
But that's just me.
I love the frog in the first panel.
and I just LOVE the last panel.
There is so much emotion in hias eyes.

Can't wait for page 2

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FeyPhantom In reply to CookyMunster [2007-10-28 20:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Not only flashbacks are essential, but characters using their strongest moves.... which it seems Jaraiya is doing at this point

Anyways thanks for the comments. Heh, for some reason I like the broken lines, but thanks for letting me know And yay! You noticed the frog! My sister didn't even notice and she got to see the paper copy of the drawing Hee, thanks!

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CookyMunster In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-10-28 22:57:37 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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trueno-uzumaki [2007-10-28 16:27:02 +0000 UTC]

T-T omg!
its beautiful!
i will read it

and yes
i love him too T-T
and im worried about if he die or not
i will kill pain* XDD

and yeaah!!
narusaku rulez XDD

i will read it! believe it X3

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FeyPhantom In reply to trueno-uzumaki [2007-10-28 20:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Nee, thank you! Heh, and I'll join in the 'down with Pain' fight if Jaraiya dies too XD

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