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Maya is an interesting specimen. She usually spends her days looking for any lone traveler that enters the Thuron plains because they are usually people who have been exiled from one of the major Nidrakian cities. She will then try to strike a conversation with the exile, asking them why they are there in the first place. Should she judge the exile as not very dangerous or unfairly exiled, she will guide them to Maxil, the city of exiles. Should they lie to her, appear dangerous, refuse to answer or try to run away however the exile will meet its end in her belly.

As usual, I'm trying to improve so any feedback is appreciated.

Description
Page 4.

Maya is an interesting specimen. She usually spends her days looking for any lone traveler that enters the Thuron plains because they are usually people who have been exiled from one of the major Nidrakian cities. She will then try to strike a conversation with the exile, asking them why they are there in the first place. Should she judge the exile as not very dangerous or unfairly exiled, she will guide them to Maxil, the city of exiles. Should they lie to her, appear dangerous, refuse to answer or try to run away however the exile will meet its end in her belly.

As usual, I'm trying to improve so any feedback is appreciated.