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FireflyRaye — Graph Paper: Ch 2 Page 21-22
Published: 2007-09-16 05:05:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 2205; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 41
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As I continue doing each page, I think "how much more ridiculous can I get?" XD
Anyways...
Haha, I'm posting pretty late tonight. *sees that it's almost 1:00 AM*
I'm very happy with how this page turned out. I'm particularly pleased with the "heavenly light" on the first panel of the second page, and the panel with Joy in it (her gun going outside the box was an unintentional effect).
If anyone is confused, in the last two panels, Talori is escaping through the skylight windows on the ceiling/near-the-top of the building (which was broken by Joy's gun).
So what have we learned?
Mr. Rat is wise.
Run child, run!!! D:
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Comments: 37
lol I'm am that mouse's number one fan.
It's so funny. XD
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lol XD Well I'm glad you're enjoying this!
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PleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE keep working on it! And NLMO too! *luffs NLMO even more* You do such an awesome job on this thing!
Ehh, I'm thinking of starting my own manga, would you mind sharing your wisdom with your lowly kouhai? *begs* You are even wiser that Mr. Rat! (lol)
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I will! 
And thanks so much! X3
Me? Wiser than Mr. Rat? I don't think that's possible. XD
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Ohh yes it's possible. *nod nod*
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It reminded me of emperors new groove too! and I love that movie
Continue the crazy crack =3
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lol XD me too!
and I shall!
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so, is mr. rat ever going to come back? i really like him...i think i might like him better than talori. XD
-kit <3's mr. rat.
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there is always the possibility. :3
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lol XD
goodness, don't hurt yourself! D: lol
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I can't help it....cute is my weakness.
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Wow, this is your best Deviantart that I've seen!!!
I can't wait to see what you do next!!!
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Very cute... But is it me, or does that look like a bit of a tear in Joy's right eye? Maybe it's just the angle at which she's standing?
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it's the angle perhaps? :\
either way, there's no tear. :3
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It's so cute! Hahah, it looks like Mr. Rat has wings in the first panel!
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lol XD
Mr. Rat can fly!!! D: *gasp!*
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Great page again. I like how mr. Rat is simply telling her the truth
Looks like Joy has pretty bad aim for an assassin. *drops on the ground to avoid the rain of bullets fired his way*
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Thank you! :3
And yeah, I agree. :\ It is pretty poor aim. *gets shot*
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hahaha I love teh epic moral thrown in there XD
you continue to improve, and the randomness is what makes this so loveable <3333
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lol XD thanks!
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Niice~! ^^
Somehow I hadn't heard of this before, but i love your style! :+favs:
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Awesome. I love it. Your colouring is real clean.
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Omg that is so adorable!
And totally reminded me of the Emporer's New Groove.
xD
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!!! XD
lol, I love that movie!!
Thank you so much! X3
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Haha I know it's great.
Welcomee!
I read the whole thing, I love it.
x]
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Wow you must've put a lot of effort into this! It's very detailed!
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lol, yes I did. XD
Thanks so much! =^__^=
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