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Published: 2009-06-24 20:06:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1801; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 67
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[prev] >>> [next][EDIT]: I just wanted to ask you guys to PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give me some kind of feedback. I don't mind if it's positive or negative, but I need to know how I'm doing. And it's hard to know how I'm doing if not a lot of people say anything. XD So please, give your support! It makes a happy author/artist!
I really thought I wasn't going to get this done in time. I got really behind on starting this, so I had to work nonstop on it. Blegh... and it looks really sloppy... not to proud of this one. :\ *pretends the last panel doesn't exist*
Speaking of which, if anyone gets the awesome reference in the last panel, you get loads of cool points.
Awwwfkajdfa. I love how Rosie looks in that one panel where she's hacking on Asura's computer. I need to draw her like that again... 'cause it's too cute. O_O
Lawlz, I wish I was funny. D:
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Comments: 55
X333 I LOVE Talori's face in the first panel XD I can't get her expression out of my head, so funny! I also love how you've drawn them forced in the dark, cramped bag :'D
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Omg. I love Talori's expression in the first panel. xD
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Aww, thanks. XD I'm glad you like it!
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gdfgdf HAHA
I love Talori in the GOLF HOOOLLLEEEE
and and and Ve at the movies. xD
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MORE PAGES! I love this comic so much It has a nice sense of humor and it keeps you interested! from the first page to this I love it all!
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Awesome 
I'm loving GP! I like the Activity #s 
Uhh only feedback I could offer is actuallya bout the colours of the words. Whenever it's a different colour I tend to hear more emphasis on that word, which works most of the time, but it seems out of place on all the pronouns for some reason
And don't worry about being funny, GP is definitely one of my fav comics
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Thanks so much XD
I understand what you mean about the word colors stuff. I kinda felt that way about it myself, but idk if anyone else felt the same way.
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zomg XD all the stupid things they did still has me laughing and I have viewed this three times. You have such a wonderful, almost theatre-of-the-absurd humour style. It's so refreshing, as is your diligence. You're ability to commit to this comic and your characters always inspires me to try and do the same.
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XD Aww, thank you! I'm so flattered! *o*
I really enjoy drawing GP and I love the characters, so I'm so happy that you're enjoying them. :3
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Rosie and Talori are the most awesome duo ever.
But that backpack looks a bit cramped. Poor things... D: I can feel the pain.
... And Asura is obviously not aware of Murhpy's law. XD
Great pages!
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XD Thank you!
And no he's not. He's too much of an optimist. XD Sorta...
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Awesome love it, but what were they thinking shoving Rosie in the bag? don't they remember she tried to shoot them before? (never shove a crazy person in a place they don't want to be)
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I guess not. XD
But thanks! :3
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LOL! xDD I can't get over Talori's face in the first panel. xDDD And the last panel, lol! xD And Rosie...gwah she's just so cute. x3
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lol XD Thanks so much!
I love drawing that face on Talori. It just suits her so much. X3
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Yes... yes they were. XD
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Haha :>
Can't wait for the next page! n.n
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lol, poor V, foiled again. ^_^ "Why are they sitting there eating Pizza? Don't they know that city's full of monsters!?" My head nearly hit the table. Good work.
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Yep yep. XD
lol, Thank you!
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You're welcome. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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I have this sneaking suspicion that the back-pack Cam and Asura have shoved Rosie and Talori in is secretly related to the talking back-pack in "Dora the Explorer"...I mean how else could two humans fit in such a small bag...? It's MAGIC/ BLASPHEMY/ INHUMANE! XD
.kitaku
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lol, Inhumane? Yea, I suppose so. XD
Then again, neither Talori or Rosie are technically human so THERE! X3
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Oh darn, you got me. Poo. XD
.kitaku
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I'm sorry I didn't comment until now.
I really enjoy your work.
You keep the story going by having an
interesting plot line and you have a knack for
putting in funny moments at the right time.
The coloring it bright, which I think is great for the plot line you are trying to give.
Overall you are doing great!
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Oh it's okay.
But thanks so so much!
I really appreciate your support! *o*
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lol XD Well I'm glad you like her!
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xD Hahaha Rosie & Talori in the bag, priceless. I like that look on Rosie's face as she says, "Don't worry, we will retaliate".
And she looks so CUTE in Activity 2 >w> her face/expression. Hahaha, Rosie fooling Cam xDD
Bahaha lots of laughs goin around >w<
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lol XD Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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At first I was like "
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D: Mere get's no cool points.
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