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Published: 2007-05-03 10:37:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 19628; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 15
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Description As snow slowly fell from the dark night sky, a 18 year old pink haired female ninja sat on watch. She looked out over the vast forests the surrounded her home village of Konoha and wept silent tears of self-pity.
‘Out of all my friends I am the only girl left.’ She thought silently as more tears ran down her cheeks. ‘Hinata has Naruto, like they always wanted. Ten-Ten has Neji, like they both always wanted. Ino has Kiba. And Temari has Shino. And yet Im sill here waiting for a man that will never come back.’ She buried her face in her arms and began to tremble with tears. “Am I really so ugly?” she asked aloud.
“Sakura, you should know you aren’t ugly, so many boys and men always loved you.” A soft comforting familiar voice came from behind her. “But because of your blindness and single mindlessness about Sasuke they all moved on. Well almost everyone.”
She dried her eyes on her shirt before her previous sensei could see the tears she was so obviously weeping.
She turned to the white haired ninja to see a peculiar look upon his face; she couldn’t quite name it though. “What are you doing here Kakashi?” she asked quite harshly. She didn’t appriciate being seen in such a week state.
“I was sent by Tsunade to take your watch.” He spoke in a cold emotionless voice.
“Fine have fun.” As she spoke she walked past her sensei to avoid any more of the awkward conversation only to be stopped by his hand around her waist. She turned to look at her sensei with a startled look on her face.
“Im sorry Sakura I wasn’t quite don’t yet.” He spoke to the ground, though his hand was now on her back he wouldn’t look her in the face. “I need to tell you this, by the look of it more for you than I… like I said before there is still some people who love you and I don’t think he can keep it a secret anymore.”
She pulled away from her sensei “thank you, but whoever it is can tell me themselves, I don’t appreciate 3rd person conversations.” Again she spoke in a cold voice.
Kakashi stepped towards her. “Well this person isn’t using 3rd person to talk to you… please listen to me Sakura.”
And with the last line Sakura’s face dropped. “K-Kakashi? What are you trying to say?” she asked her voice quavering.
“Im saying that not everyone lost love for you over the years, though you never knew, I have always loved you.” He concluded with a bright pink glow to his cheeks.
She stepped towards her old sensei, ‘is what he saying true?’ She asked herself. She was standing right in front of him looking up into his visible eye.
As though to answer her silent question her leaned towards her, risking everything on this one moment. He slipped his hand around her waist towards her back again and pulled down his black mask to reveal his lips. He pulled her closer to him and bent down and softly kissed her, realizing everything he had felt for her over the years in that one action, very aware that it may be the last time he was ever so close to her, or near her ever again.

As he lowered his black mask that always covered his mouth her eyes dropped from his to his mouth. It was so perfect ‘so hot’ were the single thoughts that went threw her mind. He pulled her closer for the kiss. All she could do was stare at the mouth that was always hidden to her. She didn’t resist, even when he placed those perfect lips against hers she just stared at the place were his lips used to be.
Then the reality set in. ‘my old sensei is kissing me, the hot sensei id always like but was to busy with Sasuke to notice… why was I so oblivious to everything but Sasuke?’ she though as he started to gently remove his perfect lips from hers. She looked into his eyes, he looked so sad. ‘No crap, what am I doing?’ she screamed to herself.
She pulled him pack to her with her own lips and slipped her arms around his neck. And together they stood in the snow, smiling wile embracing the lips of each other. ‘Who needs a Sasuke?’ she asked herself and she kissed Kakashi furiously, her tongue seamed to be dancing inside his very mouth.
The pain she felt for years, after being neglected by the only man she thought to love, that gap seemed to fill with this man, the man who has always been there, watching out for her, protecting her, giving her everything she needed without noticing it. And not she was enwrapped in him, her arms tightly pulling him into her due to the yearning inside her she had always wanted, now she knew, it was always him she wanted to fill the gap in her heart.
Together they stood, not noticing the chill of the snow falling around them. Kakashi was only aware of the soft loving body he had grown so attached to, holding her body tight against his, every soft curve of her body firmly place onto his body. And all Sakura noticed was the tall and muscular body, standing taller than her holding her as tight as she was him, the gentle yet solid body under her, from his chest to his groin she took in everything including every sensation his mouth had against hers.
And they both noticed, this is all they had ever wanted.
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Comments: 126

firerubydragon In reply to ??? [2008-04-30 04:58:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know, i juts did it for the fun of it, i dont actually like this story anymore, and the age thing i didnt notice til aftre i wrote it, but some people like it so meh il keep it up here.

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IlurfCalen In reply to firerubydragon [2008-05-03 00:47:04 +0000 UTC]

yea sun

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RocXytTzZa [2008-04-16 18:52:09 +0000 UTC]

i like your stories....and i like kaka-saku relation....i think that somewhere in the world exist a kakashi....a perfect boy.....do you?

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firerubydragon In reply to RocXytTzZa [2008-04-23 02:54:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah i do to, i think kakashi's are esy to find if you look for them, but the perfect kakashi may be harder to find!

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senessance [2008-04-15 19:30:07 +0000 UTC]

omg omg omg omg, i think u should write some more! i'm a huge kakasaku fan!

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firerubydragon In reply to senessance [2008-04-23 02:56:13 +0000 UTC]

awsome, but i dont realy like sakura, as you may find out if you read more of my fanfiction, so this is basically my only fanfic were sakura gets a happy ending, or is nice to any dergree. but im glad you liked it but there wont be another one sorry

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dazzledust [2008-03-03 17:44:48 +0000 UTC]

whoooooo!!!! KakaSaku is soooooooooooo much better than SasuSaku!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aquadore [2008-02-06 18:05:12 +0000 UTC]

You just made me love the KakaSaku pairing even more
This was such a great storye, due some unimportant gramar/spelling(perhaps?) mistakes.
So deserves to be a fav

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firerubydragon In reply to aquadore [2008-02-12 11:28:18 +0000 UTC]

lolz, thanks for the fave, and i know my grammer sucks

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naruhinatidusyuna [2008-02-02 03:10:47 +0000 UTC]

this fanfic is so beautiful! i love it!!!

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flow383 [2008-01-29 06:08:12 +0000 UTC]

omg that was like so nice ur fanfiction of kakasaku. so nice i love it!!!!^^

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firerubydragon In reply to flow383 [2008-01-29 09:45:14 +0000 UTC]

glad you think so

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flow383 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-30 01:15:43 +0000 UTC]

you should make more pwease. *puppy eyes*

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firerubydragon In reply to flow383 [2008-01-30 10:49:08 +0000 UTC]

i have, but i just havent started another kakasaku. i have a new found annoyance for Sakura so ive avoided any fanfictions that place her in a nice light after this one.
sorry, i know thats probabily not the responce you wanted. this is my only really nice fanfic about sakura, and its only because Kakashi is in it, and Kakashi is awosme.

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flow383 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-31 02:20:24 +0000 UTC]

ok^^did u make anymore fanfictions with kakashi in it?

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firerubydragon In reply to flow383 [2008-01-31 12:00:47 +0000 UTC]

nah sorry, ive been meaning to but havent thought of any. sorry

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flow383 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-02-01 03:20:12 +0000 UTC]

aww.............. ok!^^

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KakaSaku--Freak [2008-01-23 23:01:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this!! It's so cute!!
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*splode*
<3

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firerubydragon In reply to KakaSaku--Freak [2008-01-27 12:03:23 +0000 UTC]

thats good
its just a quick oneshot so im happy about the responce i got for it

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Piggyino13 [2008-01-19 18:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Those r some crack pairings in the beginning

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firerubydragon In reply to Piggyino13 [2008-01-21 11:52:03 +0000 UTC]

loolz yer i love NaruHina though.

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Piggyino13 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-21 15:18:20 +0000 UTC]

still... it's pretty impressive

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firerubydragon In reply to Piggyino13 [2008-01-27 12:18:01 +0000 UTC]

well im glad you think so

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Piggyino13 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-27 20:19:15 +0000 UTC]

^^

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neolater-co-nr [2007-11-23 17:32:47 +0000 UTC]

that's so cute

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Dianime [2007-10-01 20:48:11 +0000 UTC]

wow how kawaii!!!!!!! i love kakasaku and you did a great job!

btw hes 14 yrs older than her for future reference...... I still like it!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to Dianime [2007-10-02 11:38:47 +0000 UTC]

lolz XD thanx im glad you like it! and thanx, im never completely certain with the age differences

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starlight13 [2007-09-13 03:22:16 +0000 UTC]

nice job on this =]

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firerubydragon In reply to starlight13 [2007-09-13 10:14:33 +0000 UTC]

thanx XD glad you enjoyed it!

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starlight13 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-09-14 02:16:08 +0000 UTC]

oh your welcome =]

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loveme2day [2007-09-08 19:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I loved it! so sexy. lol

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firerubydragon In reply to loveme2day [2007-09-10 06:56:10 +0000 UTC]

lolx thanx XD glad yah liked it

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gaaraxangel [2007-07-22 13:58:31 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooooooooo cute

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firerubydragon In reply to gaaraxangel [2007-07-23 04:43:07 +0000 UTC]

thanx im glad you enjoyed it!

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Lukina13 [2007-07-10 03:04:53 +0000 UTC]

OMG I loved it! <3 *faves*

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firerubydragon In reply to Lukina13 [2007-07-10 08:20:13 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the fave, glad you like it!

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xkakashis-girlx [2007-07-09 23:12:34 +0000 UTC]

how cool! i really love this pairing and i couldn't help not smile while i read this! its soooo sweet!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to xkakashis-girlx [2007-07-10 08:22:20 +0000 UTC]

awsome im glad you like it and im glad i made you smile

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rayraysakurablossom [2007-06-29 22:46:02 +0000 UTC]

i love it its so amazing

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firerubydragon In reply to rayraysakurablossom [2007-07-02 10:40:22 +0000 UTC]

hey im glad you like it hey i had fun writing it!

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rayraysakurablossom In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-02 21:18:08 +0000 UTC]

your gaara fanfiction is good too yourvery talented and i hope you continue writing please continue thanks in advance........loves yas bye

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firerubydragon In reply to rayraysakurablossom [2007-07-03 03:10:38 +0000 UTC]

thanx heaps, your comment means alot to me, its great to know my work is liked have a great day!

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rayraysakurablossom In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-03 14:45:05 +0000 UTC]

welcomes and if you need help on anything just ask i'll help anyone*hehe*itys what i do

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firerubydragon In reply to rayraysakurablossom [2007-07-03 23:18:27 +0000 UTC]

lolz thanx might keep you to your word

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rayraysakurablossom In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-04 02:38:56 +0000 UTC]

ok i'll be happy to help but can you answer this question sry about leaving this long comment but yeah how do you know if you are fighing death or fate .......seee what happened was that i was walking down the street and next tihng i know i ws on the ground in somebodys arms seems i walked in the street and some guy carried me out of the way of a coming car. i didn't even know it was happinging tell he was checkingmy forehead to see if i had a fever. i couldn't even say anything cause i just relized what happened and began to cry. he held me close as he pulled me up and asked what was wrong. I couldn't say anything i was so sshocked then he lifted me up and carried me to some steps near by and set me up. I was crying so baad i couldn't see even it was so blurry. He started singing some song and then i started to calm down. He started making since in my head now i could hear his voice clearer. He sounded so sweet he was so caring. He was asking if i was better nad if i was hurt at any way. I finally spoke and said whats your name he said danny and i also then told him that he was crushing my rib cage and i had hurt it when he pushed me out of the way. He then relized he had me in a tight grip and he loosened up but didn't let go.....i told him my name and he smiled said it was special....i kinda blushed oops he then made sure i ws ok and said he hopes to see me again and hugged me then walked offf before i could ask why he said and did those things....i didn't even get to say thnaks you andddd thenn a couple weeks later i saved somebody but i didn't do what he did i wasn't comfortable and i had a bruise that still hurt from him help me please

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firerubydragon In reply to rayraysakurablossom [2007-07-04 02:51:41 +0000 UTC]

holy dam, thats a long and complicated story, but it soundskinda like fate, i recon you's to ll meet again, this danny guy sounds really nice, he sounds like a keeper. and i think you saved someone because of ying-yang, im a strong beliver in it, with all good in the universe there is bad. with all actions there is a re-action, i belive that becuase you were saved you also saved someone and ballenced it out... but the bruise part i dont understand, is it goood or bad he bruised you??? he sounds like one of those good samaritians and a nice perosn... im always cautious but i think he sounds nice, is the age differance big or is it just normal or what??? lolz, im sorry if i sound pushy

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rayraysakurablossom In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-14 00:52:48 +0000 UTC]

thnaks and that does help i don't really know if the age is a bad thing i don't know i want to meet him again so i can thnak him

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firerubydragon In reply to rayraysakurablossom [2007-07-14 06:07:06 +0000 UTC]

true, well ive never really been in that situation but i do wish you the best of luck no matter what happens

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rayraysakurablossom In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-14 15:44:49 +0000 UTC]

thnaks and i hope you never do get in that situation i'm just a trouble magnet ask my freinds thats what they call me

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zoologybabe [2007-06-26 15:42:37 +0000 UTC]

i agree kakashi is definatly too awsome to be gay! and my mates all agree well said!!!!! by the way 1 of them wants to kno do u think that kakagai is funny?

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