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Published: 2007-05-03 10:37:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 19628; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 15
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Description As snow slowly fell from the dark night sky, a 18 year old pink haired female ninja sat on watch. She looked out over the vast forests the surrounded her home village of Konoha and wept silent tears of self-pity.
‘Out of all my friends I am the only girl left.’ She thought silently as more tears ran down her cheeks. ‘Hinata has Naruto, like they always wanted. Ten-Ten has Neji, like they both always wanted. Ino has Kiba. And Temari has Shino. And yet Im sill here waiting for a man that will never come back.’ She buried her face in her arms and began to tremble with tears. “Am I really so ugly?” she asked aloud.
“Sakura, you should know you aren’t ugly, so many boys and men always loved you.” A soft comforting familiar voice came from behind her. “But because of your blindness and single mindlessness about Sasuke they all moved on. Well almost everyone.”
She dried her eyes on her shirt before her previous sensei could see the tears she was so obviously weeping.
She turned to the white haired ninja to see a peculiar look upon his face; she couldn’t quite name it though. “What are you doing here Kakashi?” she asked quite harshly. She didn’t appriciate being seen in such a week state.
“I was sent by Tsunade to take your watch.” He spoke in a cold emotionless voice.
“Fine have fun.” As she spoke she walked past her sensei to avoid any more of the awkward conversation only to be stopped by his hand around her waist. She turned to look at her sensei with a startled look on her face.
“Im sorry Sakura I wasn’t quite don’t yet.” He spoke to the ground, though his hand was now on her back he wouldn’t look her in the face. “I need to tell you this, by the look of it more for you than I… like I said before there is still some people who love you and I don’t think he can keep it a secret anymore.”
She pulled away from her sensei “thank you, but whoever it is can tell me themselves, I don’t appreciate 3rd person conversations.” Again she spoke in a cold voice.
Kakashi stepped towards her. “Well this person isn’t using 3rd person to talk to you… please listen to me Sakura.”
And with the last line Sakura’s face dropped. “K-Kakashi? What are you trying to say?” she asked her voice quavering.
“Im saying that not everyone lost love for you over the years, though you never knew, I have always loved you.” He concluded with a bright pink glow to his cheeks.
She stepped towards her old sensei, ‘is what he saying true?’ She asked herself. She was standing right in front of him looking up into his visible eye.
As though to answer her silent question her leaned towards her, risking everything on this one moment. He slipped his hand around her waist towards her back again and pulled down his black mask to reveal his lips. He pulled her closer to him and bent down and softly kissed her, realizing everything he had felt for her over the years in that one action, very aware that it may be the last time he was ever so close to her, or near her ever again.

As he lowered his black mask that always covered his mouth her eyes dropped from his to his mouth. It was so perfect ‘so hot’ were the single thoughts that went threw her mind. He pulled her closer for the kiss. All she could do was stare at the mouth that was always hidden to her. She didn’t resist, even when he placed those perfect lips against hers she just stared at the place were his lips used to be.
Then the reality set in. ‘my old sensei is kissing me, the hot sensei id always like but was to busy with Sasuke to notice… why was I so oblivious to everything but Sasuke?’ she though as he started to gently remove his perfect lips from hers. She looked into his eyes, he looked so sad. ‘No crap, what am I doing?’ she screamed to herself.
She pulled him pack to her with her own lips and slipped her arms around his neck. And together they stood in the snow, smiling wile embracing the lips of each other. ‘Who needs a Sasuke?’ she asked herself and she kissed Kakashi furiously, her tongue seamed to be dancing inside his very mouth.
The pain she felt for years, after being neglected by the only man she thought to love, that gap seemed to fill with this man, the man who has always been there, watching out for her, protecting her, giving her everything she needed without noticing it. And not she was enwrapped in him, her arms tightly pulling him into her due to the yearning inside her she had always wanted, now she knew, it was always him she wanted to fill the gap in her heart.
Together they stood, not noticing the chill of the snow falling around them. Kakashi was only aware of the soft loving body he had grown so attached to, holding her body tight against his, every soft curve of her body firmly place onto his body. And all Sakura noticed was the tall and muscular body, standing taller than her holding her as tight as she was him, the gentle yet solid body under her, from his chest to his groin she took in everything including every sensation his mouth had against hers.
And they both noticed, this is all they had ever wanted.
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Comments: 126

firerubydragon In reply to ??? [2007-06-27 03:19:55 +0000 UTC]

funny but rong on so many levals... lmao, yer defently funny but just rong

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zoologybabe In reply to firerubydragon [2007-07-13 18:49:40 +0000 UTC]

i agree ,wrong on sooooo many levels! i hate yaoi all together, but bugging people by pairing their fave charcters off weirdly like ermmm......................shikachou, i hate it but it annoys my friends so lol!
my fave pairing is kibahina!
yey kiba!!!!!!!!

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wickedangel17 [2007-06-20 15:43:47 +0000 UTC]

wow!!! im not a huge fan of this pairing but they're just so cute together!!! great job!

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MuslimMangaQueen In reply to wickedangel17 [2010-08-19 06:28:01 +0000 UTC]

hehehe luv ur avatar fellow itachi fan

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wickedangel17 In reply to MuslimMangaQueen [2010-08-25 16:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! Lol sadly I didn't make it, someone else did though I cannot remember their name ><

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MuslimMangaQueen In reply to wickedangel17 [2010-08-26 06:21:03 +0000 UTC]

lol whatever its still absoloutly awesome

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wickedangel17 In reply to MuslimMangaQueen [2010-08-26 14:37:18 +0000 UTC]

I agree

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MuslimMangaQueen In reply to wickedangel17 [2010-08-27 01:22:15 +0000 UTC]

of course u do

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wickedangel17 In reply to MuslimMangaQueen [2010-08-31 14:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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MuslimMangaQueen In reply to wickedangel17 [2010-09-01 03:18:58 +0000 UTC]

lolz

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firerubydragon In reply to wickedangel17 [2007-06-21 01:22:05 +0000 UTC]

thanx heaps im glad you like it!

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zoologybabe In reply to ??? [2007-06-13 18:05:04 +0000 UTC]

soz didnt kno i sent it the 1st time lol!

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firerubydragon In reply to zoologybabe [2007-06-13 23:41:29 +0000 UTC]

okay, well sorry about saying more but although i do agree with your point ive said in a couple of other comment that i like the pairing, (forgot i wrote that) but i do not agree with the hole age differance thing but if the ages were around 8 years like it was sposed to be in this fanfiction i would have a greed with the coupling... so technicly i do not disagree with the pairing intierly but i dont like the 14 year differance.
i hope im making sence anywayz like i said before i hope i didnt offend you, i didnt mean the age gap to be so large.

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zoologybabe In reply to firerubydragon [2007-06-14 17:15:13 +0000 UTC]

soz i didn't mean to be annoying this 1 isnt' that bad i suppose. leesaku sounds better, anyway of course it didnt offend me its just a fanfiction, the fanfictions i hat the most are irukaka, if u or anyone u kno writes those sorry but i think they are supremly sick! kakashi and iruka are not GAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to zoologybabe [2007-06-15 02:48:29 +0000 UTC]

no one in naruto are gay! EXPECIALLY NOT Gaara... kakashi is to awsome to be gay anyways, i really hate yaoi.... and nah you didnt offend, i just wanted to explain myself kinda :S lolz...

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zoologybabe In reply to ??? [2007-06-13 18:04:04 +0000 UTC]

by the by kakashi is 27 when sakura is 12-13 so in ur fanfiction he is 32 which is a 14 year age gap. And this is wrong an sick on so many levels! kakashi and sakura do not make a good couple she would have been better of with sasuke (and i hate sasuke so thats something comin from me!). *depp breaths* ok i'm done now.

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firerubydragon In reply to zoologybabe [2007-06-13 23:36:52 +0000 UTC]

okay, and yes you sent it 2ce but your point is valid. i was not sure about their ages until after i wrote it i was under the impression that the age differance would be around about 8 years. im not to great at nowing all their ages but a freind of mine from school told me there ages and made the same point as you... i dicided to remove the fanfiction but its gotten a load of favorites (well a load for my standerds) so i figured i dont have to like it heaps but if others do they can continue to read it.
i kinda agree with your point but im just not going to remove it, but it isnt one of my favorites because of your fact.
personally i do prefer leesaku but i dont really like either of those charicters at least here i like kakashi so i dicided to go along with that one day when i was really bored... i hope i dont offend you or annoy you by having this fanfiction on here.

sencirly yours firerubydragon

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tptzre [2007-06-08 21:37:58 +0000 UTC]

good story im not really a sakura and kakashi fan but i like the stary a lot all the same. great job

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firerubydragon In reply to tptzre [2007-06-10 05:38:59 +0000 UTC]

thanx heaps hey, i didnt think much of the pareing either for a while but i couldnt think of anyone who sakura would go well with and kakashi is awsome and single... im not a yaoi fan so i dont think either of them should be gay, even if i dont like sakura. but back to my main point i like the basic story and the couple in my opinion are okay... glad you like it and thanx heaps for the comment...

sorry about rambeling!

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tptzre In reply to firerubydragon [2007-06-12 22:51:11 +0000 UTC]

no problem when ever i find a peice that i like i think the author or artist should know that i liked it. after all thats what this site is for to share and get honest opinions on ones work oh and i ramble a lot too! XD

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firerubydragon In reply to tptzre [2007-06-13 06:21:41 +0000 UTC]

lolz its kool, but yer its much apriciated, im glad you like my work... XD

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JaidaLockai In reply to ??? [2007-06-06 17:33:37 +0000 UTC]

omg i love it!!! so cute sfgakjsd ah glksadf <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<<3<<3<3<3<3<3<3<<3<3<3<3<<3<3<3<<3<3<3*****************************************************************bjkbnkvg

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firerubydragon In reply to JaidaLockai [2007-06-07 06:30:42 +0000 UTC]

im glad you like it, thanx for the comment its much apriciated!

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Chiri-Chiri In reply to ??? [2007-05-28 14:26:25 +0000 UTC]

i LOVE it!! kakashi and sakura are so good pair

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firerubydragon In reply to Chiri-Chiri [2007-05-29 05:56:32 +0000 UTC]

why thank you i agree too!!

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