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ASAILIOSS [2016-04-23 08:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh cool ! This looks intense ! ! Ahh ! ! ! Very epic duel of the fates going on here and excellent choice for the fighting poses ! And those rocks flailing about woooh the little details make this more intense ! ! !that background again is killin it ! The buildings are subtle but they really go a long way you know what i mean??

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InsomniaDoodles [2016-04-15 08:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work on the dynamic poses!

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quinntheking [2016-04-09 05:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Hello!

I'm also here from ProjectComment , from tagline 80!

I was asked to pick a piece with the theme of "Energetic", and this one seems to fit the bill pretty well– it does seem like a very dynamic pose, and I like how the buldings, sword, and hair kind of all form an arc around the action. The poses themselves are also energetic– and I like how they are laid out. I also like the textures you used throughout the piece– the rocks near the bottom are a nice contrast to the arced bits, and the textures used to shade the pants and shirt of the character on the left are interesting. 

One area I would work on is the perspective of the faces– you do it well for the overall poses, but the face of the one on the right seems a bit off. 

Overall, this is an interesting and dynamic piece!   

Sorry for the delay in the comment!

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PointyHat [2016-04-07 17:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Hello from a fellow ProjectComment member!

First, let me say that your use of angle/perspective in this piece is great.  It gives your drawing an overall feeling of excitement and action without relying on color, and that's a great skill to have.  To add to the feeling of action, we can see all of the jagged rocks in the foreground which appear to be stabbing upwards; I imagine that the boy in the corner has just made a hard landing on the ground, and those shards are a result of the force with which he hit the ground.   In terms of composition, my eye was immediately drawn to the woman in this image, due to her black clothing.  You do a nice job of leaving white space around her to help balance the amount of black she's wearing, and that helps prevent too much visual clutter.  Some suggestions: perhaps, rather than putting your watermark in a different color up there in the corner, you might work it subtly into the midst of the piece so that it doesn't detract from the drawing?  That would also prevent it from being cropped out of the image if someone intended on stealing the work.

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SotoArts [2016-04-06 22:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Hello
so I think that this art work is really well done as good as other of your previous artworks, with a lot of dedication. What I see here is that the shadow effect is really good   The poses are amazing you nailed the part of expression of actual action on the scene. The anatomy is really good Asa well as the proportions and the expression on the is faces.
The background is also a good gob and helps with the ambient and atmosphere. The effects of power is a signature there. 
For me there's no much I can say to correct and improve this image. The details for that are minimal. In resume this is an amazing job.

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Luz-Vi-Minda [2016-04-06 00:25:41 +0000 UTC]

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Things I like: a lot of movement. The characters expression specially the ninja girl's is spot on. I like the broken rocks at the foreground it adds to the bad ass quality of the work. I also like the shadowing its flawless for me. The warped buildings at the background is genius.

Things I don't like: Hardly anything though I wish the other female character is in eye contact with the female umm ninja or assassin.

I love everything about it, for improvements, I think I already said it. I kinda even envy this work, I will sometime might pass something as detailed as this but then maybe that is my style. Keep yours even if this is not colored <3 it

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lydia-san [2016-04-05 15:10:55 +0000 UTC]

GILEEEEEE perspectivenya dasyaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttt
bikin gridnya gimana nih tik?

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Dark-Lina [2016-04-01 08:38:23 +0000 UTC]

duekl scene look great ^^ i don't know how to drwing them any tip ?

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sidnegandhi [2016-03-29 19:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Amazing  

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rainbow000pegasus [2016-03-28 14:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Cool, the contrast is really nice, especially the rocks/soil.

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moonmute [2016-03-27 15:12:30 +0000 UTC]

That's a neat action scene

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docterzero [2016-03-27 08:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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