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yansenwijaya [2016-08-13 18:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Wahh that coloring style 😍😍😍

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British-Prophetess [2016-01-22 15:06:03 +0000 UTC]

I think they make such a cute and well balanced couple

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mio-mio [2015-10-06 13:43:07 +0000 UTC]

You really acomplished the ice look, you did a great job shading the icicles and I love the right character's hair

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Dradra-Trici [2015-09-20 17:18:09 +0000 UTC]

This is a really dynamic picture!
You've done a very good job on the magical powers!

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ToddNTheShiningSword [2015-09-16 02:43:51 +0000 UTC]

I first have to say that the title and picture are both great and go together great too, because I saw this and instantly thought of ice and fire from the details, AND THEN I saw the title, moments after that... so you did awesome! All the effects are awesome.

I really like the girl's hair. The hairstyle and drawing style.

Just like before, ass far as critique goes... it seems like other people's have been about background and color, but I can't do those and can only do lines and anatomy and stuff. For this one, I can only say that her torso needs to have more twist in it. Her stomach should probably be at an angle in between the one of her rib cage and the one of her hips. Closer in twist to the hips.
Other than that, I see nothing wrong.
I'm glad you got advice for colors that everyone is happy about.
I'm a little confused about what the male is doing though.

Wow. What a lover's quarrel! I spent a little bit of time imagining how this relationship could work! LOL your advice to Draco. If he survives. I'm glad I commented on this one before the big duel at the top of your Forum post, because now that I've seen this, I understand more that they fight! 

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xKeitara [2015-09-13 16:35:38 +0000 UTC]

wow the background is awesome and stunning!!

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Iduna-Haya [2015-09-07 06:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Great colors You really added extra depth and dimension compared to the previous one. 

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craftsbyblue [2015-09-03 00:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Great use of blues and purples; you are very good with colors!

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ChrisDonnell [2015-08-24 13:09:47 +0000 UTC]

This is so powerful, such a vibrant piece of work and he detail you've captured is amazing, great work! 

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UsamahDraws [2015-07-29 03:15:25 +0000 UTC]

This is a great start no doubt! There are couple issues, but that's okay cause we're all learning right?!  I'd just keep practicing on the fundamentals , they are very difficult to master, as even the greatest artists ever struggled severely to become as skillful as they were . Also learning how to master the tools of Photoshop is key! There are some super great tutorials here and on youtube (LEVEL UP, FZD school of design, CUBEBRUSH just to name a few) so make sure you check them out! learning from the pros helps a ton and trying to get through digital painting all on your own with no help is unwise and really hard. good luck!
Thanks for sharing

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Livia-Anna [2015-07-03 14:30:02 +0000 UTC]

I really like it!
You could add some eyes maybe
Great job tho!

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PHangman [2015-06-28 02:17:09 +0000 UTC]

nice work on this one.

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tinselswan [2015-06-24 21:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Ugh i'm in love with the fire v ice thing since i was born  

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TylerReitan [2015-06-07 19:52:45 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one, the expression on the characters faces are made very well and so are the pillars of ice

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ChaseKBergeron [2015-05-27 21:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Blue earth of wonderful beautiful thoughts established....Wonderful this is.....  

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ZAPPLEdraws [2015-05-24 21:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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DizzyMouse [2015-05-24 03:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Hii, comment from projectcomment.deviantart.com/  !

First thing I noticed on your drawing was the ice, which is really nice! Good job on that!

For your characters, there are a few things I would work on. The girl's arms are not properly done. The two parts of the arm are supposed to be close to the same size, while in your illustation the forarm is longer. Aslo, her hand is a bit too curvy.
For the clothes, I really like the see-thought effect of her dress, it is nicely done. However, hoodie seem too flat. Try giving it more shapes with more shadows (darker ones), always use references when you draw It helps a lot!

The composition is great, you have a circle around your female character which really sets the focus on her! Good job!

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drawign [2015-05-23 08:50:01 +0000 UTC]

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hey, i really like the colors here! i also like how you incorporated so much texture - it adds a bit of visual interest to the piece.

the character designs look really original, too - it's good that you didn't draw a stereotypical over-sexualised female fantasy character outfit for the person on the right, if you get what i mean. 

anyway, here are some suggestions:

1 - i really love the colors and the textures, but i feel that your background is too bright or too full of detail - it draws the viewer's attention away from the two subjects of the picture. maybe you could tone down the colors of the ice and fire, or simply not add so much detail.

2 - the hood of the person on the left looks kind of awkward. using a reference would help a lot. generally, the insides of hoods don't face outwards, unless they're flipped - but in that case, the hood would be slightly raised because it's inside-out. 

3 - the body of the character on the right looks slightly disproportionate. first, the armpits seem a bit too high up. more importantly, the angle of the body is kinda confusing. the torso is 3/4 left, but the legs are drawn almost completely in side view. additionally, the knee looks awkward - maybe move the exact corner of the knee slightly downwards?

overall, good job! this piece is really original and i can tell a lot of care was put into it, so i hope you keep up the good work!! 

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I-mpavidus [2015-05-22 19:33:37 +0000 UTC]

Love your use of colors, movement, and lighting! This is a great piece. For some constructive criticism, I would say work on your anatomy a bit. 

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apples-ishness [2015-05-20 08:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Your character designs are very interesting - little details are what makes characters unique
The way you used the effects creates a lot of tension and excitement, although it's a little difficult to choose a focus point because there is so much to take in. Perhaps if the blue-flame-ice-crystal that is slowly surrounding the character with the blue hoodie made a straight line from the other character's hand the viewer's eye would be better directed around the scene. I also think the painting could have benefitted from a larger composition - for example place the characters in a larger environment, this will prevent the scene from appearing centralized and hectic. It's all about getting the perspective right. With a larger environment, you could really show off the character's (with the blue flames) overwhelming power (it seems this is what you intented), and it would be in contrast to the other character's (with the hoodie) power creating more tension in the scene.

Great job on creating a thrilling painting!

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lydia-san [2015-05-20 07:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Wihh keren... ini OC??

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ContraSprite [2015-05-19 22:07:48 +0000 UTC]

This looks great! They are definitely both in focus now! I don't remember if the flames at her feet where the same before or not, but they look really great now! Now sure if it's because you changed them or just something around them, but either way, they are very eye catching now. :] I also really like the purple that you added into the ice crystals surrounding the guy. I can see that you put the color reflection on her clothes as well, it's a very nice addition and makes the how picture seem more balanced. :] The whole thing is really improved! Great work!  

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