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SayuYazawa [2015-11-30 09:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I come from 's comment tag game, with the word attraction, so i guess it's obvious why I chose this picture from your gallery.  

I love the contrast between red and black here, it's very appealing, definitely an intelligent decision! It shows that you have a good sense of aesthetic and color scheme. The composition appears very harmonious as well, I think every element is well placed so good job on that too. I love the flowers and how you colored them, and the detail on the girl's dress is very nice too, I can see the hard work! 

Now, something that might need a bit more practice is anatomy in general. It's not really off, but something about it feels kind of forced at some points. Especially about the boy, he looks quite tense, his body is very straight. It is very difficult to catch side-view proportion, so I hope this references will be helpful for you : 

ONE,  TWO  and THREE.  

The movement with the wind is well portrayed too, but I suggest letting the hair loose a bit more, don't be afraid of drawing random hair locks here and there, it will look more natural and the results may surprise you in a good way! Also, even if you want the boy's hair to be light-colored or even white, you can put a little more detail on it. Hair has shades and semitones too, it is never uniform. 

I also like their expressions a lot. She seems hopeful, waiting for him, while he looks frustrated. Really good job, in summary! Keep it up, I hope I could help you somehow. Your next target is and your tag word is aggressive. Have a nice day!

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wideyedkitten11 [2015-11-17 03:00:09 +0000 UTC]

There is just something really pleasing, sweet and mysterious about this! The technique here is pretty good! Maybe just a more even crop around the characters to make it more balanced!

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BlackTeaChai [2015-11-14 18:39:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful!
I really like the contrast between the black and white with the red flowers. I like how detailed the whole scene is, and the symbolism how these two are connected to each other with that thread, its really cool.

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U23Art [2015-11-08 16:54:00 +0000 UTC]

The arrangement of this piece came out nicely.

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British-Prophetess [2015-11-06 18:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is really fantastic - one of your most impressive pieces yet in my opinion! I adore your anime style as it's really interesting in a visual kind of way and it's a great thing that you included the colour of red. That was immediately the first thing I saw, so yeah the red does stand out along with the string too. The characters are really awesome as usual; I like their background story/shared relationship

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Hikatsuke [2015-11-03 18:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I´m here from

My favourite part of this work of yours are the flowers - they look really good and you created a good contrast with their red and the black ink of the two characters you drew. What kind of flowers are those? What is their name? (I searched for it in your description, but it only said "this flower") Now about the charactes - I like their poses and the red string their holding that connect them. The details are already good at their clothes - you did well especially at her dress - but you could improve a little when it comes to the details of their hair. I would have liked to see some hanks in Dracos hair for example.
The shading is quite good when I take a look at the flowers and the clothes - you could improve the shading of their hair, however. E.g. when I take a look at Dracos hair - I don´t any shading there, but even if his hair is white there could be at least a little difference to the background.

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mieufille [2015-11-03 17:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done firey! so simple and wonderful. Keep up the good work ! 

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ChaseKBergeron [2015-11-03 10:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Crimson bloom entrance this wave of sighted eyes, this, a beautiful way of wonder indeed....

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Kirie300 [2015-11-02 15:37:47 +0000 UTC]

I like this picture. I love the red against the black and white. I like the emotion and subject. I would say it looks a little flat and I know that is part of the style but maybe bringing some depth would really bump your work up. Good job, I really do like it

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LuckyStarLane [2015-10-31 03:53:40 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you used the color red.  it is not over whelming and adds to the image quite well .  the way the string is attached and they seem almost like they are discovering it and the string is the same color as the flowers, it seems they share a special connection perhaps they are only now discovering and have a long road of happiness ahead together .  also the way you did the flowers really push back the characters in the right way  

well done  

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Eclipse-The-Awesome [2015-10-30 05:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Hiya, I'm from ProjectComment !

  I really love the feeling of this piece, especially the facial expression of the characters. Draco almost looks irritated by his fate, but the little frown makes him look concerned. Sapphira manages to look both saddened and hopeful. The slope of the flowers you drew frames them in nicely. Although, I think the composition could be slightly improved by moving Draco a bit to the left so he's exactly one third in on the piece; they look a bit squished at the moment!

  Since this piece has a focus on the character's hands, I think this tutorial may be useful to you fav.me/d1dvt5y .

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SoulWardenInfinity [2015-10-30 00:47:27 +0000 UTC]

I really like the contrast between the red flowers and the black and white characters. It does a great job of setting an atmosphere. Only complaint is that you might need to work on there eyes a bit. Over all I really like the piece though
Great job! 

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BTwixtUandMe [2015-10-29 18:33:58 +0000 UTC]

i reallylike this picture.the flowers are really eyecatching.

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rainbow000pegasus [2015-10-29 15:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Red string... WHY IS IT ALWAYS RED STRING? I don't get it.

Ehh, I don't really know what's up with these two, but the flowers are defying the wind- ahahahaha.

Gotta love those flowers, though.

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OCDGothNerd [2015-10-29 15:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Pretty.

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OfOneSoul [2015-10-29 12:48:14 +0000 UTC]

I love that you uploaded separate images and then showed the connected picture. It's clever and well done. Wonderful work, sweet pea!

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isabell94 [2015-10-29 11:27:18 +0000 UTC]

so nice pictures ^^ .I liked it ^^ <3.

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