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sweetsarcasm24 [2016-05-01 02:26:53 +0000 UTC]

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Your image is very well executed your vision or general Picture was shown well.The way you drew this picture is honestly fantastic and your shading is really well done you have to make sure though that you don't over shade on some parts like the face. The reason is because then it will take away from everything else. Also make sure that if you do an elaborate background that it is detailed but not too much that it take away the meaning of the original image. I truly love this and you did really well smile on and be good.

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CeliliaWonder [2016-08-13 18:22:43 +0000 UTC]

She's so beautiful!

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pizzakitkat [2016-08-13 07:42:22 +0000 UTC]

I just really like your art style so much !!

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vt2000 [2016-07-19 15:08:34 +0000 UTC]

I love your attention to detail! the line art is very nice! the gear background is my favorite part! well done on doing Steam punk dress!

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magicalmermaidcat [2016-07-12 06:15:19 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing!

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DecorativeDoodle [2016-06-29 16:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Is this created with pencil or black pen?? This is sooooo beautiful. .Love those eyes the most!!

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himehisagi [2016-06-10 07:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice artwork and you're doing great in detail. Keep up the great work.

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K-S-O [2016-05-30 20:02:23 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice!

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BubbleGrass394 [2016-05-27 05:15:24 +0000 UTC]

It's a very awesome drawing. I like how you put the details. The background was also very stunning. 

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Marzi17 [2016-05-13 12:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Hiya - member here.

First off, I love the amount of detail that you've put into this, especially concerning her outfit and the background; it looks like it took a long time to do this, and the little bits such as the cogs behind her and the ruffles in her corset really bring the picture together in my opinion. The monochrome style is a nice touch too, I think, and the fact that you've incorporated no colour into this piece looks good.

However, a little tiny nitpick which I noticed is that with her waist, it appears to be a tiny bit too pinched in at the middle - you've done a very good job with the anatomy and I think that it looks pretty realistic in a general sense, but that little part of her is throwing me off a little so a way to potentially fix that is to perhaps make it a little wider (so as to fit in with her overall proportions better). You've done well with this though - keep it up

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KayStarlit [2016-05-12 10:26:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the details on this picture! And that background!

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Arasteia [2016-05-11 08:51:02 +0000 UTC]

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Firstly – bonus points for the awesome steampunk woman! Her design is really cool (I think I’ve actually seen your work of her on this group before) and I love all the little intricacies. The level of detail really rounds out the picture; it’s very impressive. I also like the monochrome palette – I think that works very well for your style and the mood of the piece.

The first thing that sticks out to me is the bend of her torso. As I wear a corset myself sometimes, I know that it can sometimes do strange things, but I think the bend in this is a little extreme. I think it curves just a little too far to the left and I think if it were to bend slightly less and end in the middle of the body, between the two ends of the skirt (?) that would help it look a bit more centred.

I also notice that one breast is slightly larger than the other. Even with the angle of her body, I think the bottom line of the right breast looks a little too high in comparison to the left. To be really picky, her back below her left underarm looks slightly too far from her breasts and I think it could be a little further in, but it’s not a focal point in the picture so it’s not too drastic.

You could possibly say that the background is slightly cluttered, and there is a tiny bit too much going on in the picture, but your OC still is obviously the focal point and she definitely stands out from it, so that’s not a big issue.

So yeah, I really like the picture but I think some anatomical errors do stick out a tiny bit.   

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SleepySoren [2016-05-10 19:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, I love your shading style. 

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Eternal-Shadow-S [2016-05-10 08:48:05 +0000 UTC]

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This is a pretty good piece. The tones are very good, actually giving it more color than most people think. Now, there is one thing that does seem like a distraction. It's a very minor nitpick. It's not something that completely ruins the image, but it is still something that is worth noting. The head looks a little too pushed forward. If you look at the image a bit, it would look as if the neck is attached to the back of the head, as if it were just nailed on at the back, or it were a mask. Next thing I kinda noticed is that the right eye is a little smaller than the left. The change of the size usually applies to the width, rather than the length. Besides these two, nothing's wrong with the picture. Again, these are nitpicks and don't ruin the image, but should still be noted. This is an excellent pic, good line work and the tones and shades are especially good. Keep it up!

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Kainatarma [2016-05-08 04:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Amazing details and clean nice lineart!

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chinchongcha [2016-05-07 05:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Many detail line art >w< Never stop impress me >w<

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Vexysss [2016-05-01 01:40:28 +0000 UTC]

I like how clear the image is here! ^_^ Your lines are very nice and clean, and I especially like the eyes :3

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