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"Who are they," the chief officer of the starliner, Raumfahrer, asked Captain Kurtzmann."They're a group of fanatic pilgrims," he replied through a tight smile as he nodded perfunctorily at a small mass of red cloaked figures marching by. Several of the men smiled meekly and made odd gestures to the Captain and his crew. "They're followers of the Slain God."
"I've heard about them. They worship an ancient myth. Their God was violently murdered for preaching peace to his followers. Very ironic, if a bit anarchistic."
"These 'anarchists' chartered an entire liner for their pilgrimage. Please bear that in mind," the captain hissed in a 'watch your ass' tone.
A figure, conspicuous by his white raiment and the ornate staff he carried, broke from the group of crimson frocked men. "Are our quarters ready?"
"We have cleared an entire hold for your group. Your uh, uh Your Eminence," he quickly added, remembering the term of address from an article he had read.
"Please, so such formalities. I am but a humble pilgrim. I'm sure what you have arranged is adequate."
"I must implore you to reconsider, Sir. There are only 30 of you, and you have the entire ship of 450 staterooms. Surely, you would be more comfortable…"
"Is everything prepared as requested," the wizened figure interrupted.
"Yes Sir. The hold has been cleansed and spread with the leaves you provided."
"I'm sure it will be most adequate for as far as we need to go."
"I don't know how comfortable it will be for the entire journey. Even with the torch drive, Copernicus is a long way off."
The old man smiled warmly. "As I said, as far as we need to go."
"Weird group, this," remarked the helmsman as the captain stepped onto the bridge.
"Yes, they're friendly enough, but they make me uncomfortable. There's something about their leader that bothers me."
"Do you think there'll be trouble?"
"It's not that. It's as if he's expecting something. As if he's got an inside joke and I'm not in on it." The captain became lost in contemplation for a moment. "Pull up the feed from hold three, please," He said turning to the communications officer.
In an empty space in front of the bridge, the cavernous interior of hold three appeared. Before a large mass of palm fronds, the men had erected a wooden structure and now knelt before it. It consisted of an upright, neatly bisected by a shorter cross brace. A low chant came from the men. "Kyrie eleison, Christe eleison." The chant was repeated, rising and falling in volume.
"Well, nothing sinister there, but I just can't shake…"
"Sir," a sharp ejaculation cut him off, "what the hell is going on?"
Startled by the brusqueness of one of his officers, Kurtzmann spun around to confront an ashen faced ensign pointing at the ships forward view.
The bridge crew stared as, one by one, the stars winked out.
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Comments: 23
Rafellin [2011-10-23 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]
This remains one of only flash fiction pieces that I regard as something that raises the standard of the genre.
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FirstSarge In reply to Rafellin [2011-10-28 14:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Well, I don't know about that. It basically started as a vehicle to point out the irony of Christ's death. But if you feel it raised the bar, who am I to argue in all of my modesty.
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Rafellin In reply to FirstSarge [2011-11-20 15:11:40 +0000 UTC]
I read it again. Still marvellous. Really cannot quantify what makes it such a piece for me, but that's part of why I rate it so highly.
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KreepingSpawn [2011-04-29 01:34:09 +0000 UTC]
"And darkness shall be upon the face of the Earth..."
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FirstSarge In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-04-29 10:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Damnnit. I was seriously trying to remember that passage, but I couldn't remember where or exactly what it was. Damnnit.
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KreepingSpawn In reply to FirstSarge [2011-04-29 16:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Book of Revelations. ;}
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FirstSarge In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-04-30 02:20:21 +0000 UTC]
You'd have thought I'd have remembered that. That's my favourite book. That's where all the good stuff is. Depending on how you look at "the Good Stuff."
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FirstSarge In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-04-30 11:53:33 +0000 UTC]
I think perhaps I am a bit too macabre for the Bible... or the Bible... BLASPHEMER
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All-My-Darkness [2011-04-25 10:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Backing vocals
of planetary destruction
And gregorian chant
filled me on this
Your pie is twisted
and full of darkberries
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FirstSarge In reply to All-My-Darkness [2011-04-25 11:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Ha, very cool poem. When I finally get off my ass and finish my book, you'll have to give me a cover blurb.
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All-My-Darkness In reply to FirstSarge [2011-04-26 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh that would be funny shit ahaha...
Now listen hear wet turds!
This is tale of pie and evil.
Mostly pie.
You may like part of it.
you may love all of it.
You may think its darker
than OJ Simpson during
a blackout.
One things for sure.
You'll be glad you
put the kids to bed.
Read on my dispassionate
generic spineless monkeys..
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FirstSarge In reply to All-My-Darkness [2011-04-26 22:03:06 +0000 UTC]
Darker than... AHAHAHAHA
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FirstSarge In reply to Isengim [2011-04-25 11:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Well I was in Church when inspiration hit, plus Greek does sound so cool.
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Isengim In reply to FirstSarge [2011-04-26 02:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Hehe - the only time religion and inspiration mix for me is arguing religion with Baptists. And winning. Fun times...
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FirstSarge In reply to Isengim [2011-04-26 10:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Babtists? Come on. Isn't that like taking advantage of retarded children.
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Isengim In reply to FirstSarge [2011-04-26 22:10:34 +0000 UTC]
First: I was drunk.
Second: They told me they knew God better than I did.
It was like a bar fight, only they admitted defeat under the wrath of my rambling philosophical logic.
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FirstSarge In reply to Isengim [2011-04-26 22:25:33 +0000 UTC]
Drunken philosphic rambling. Is there a better kind?
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Isengim In reply to FirstSarge [2011-04-27 00:21:21 +0000 UTC]
Not if you can remember it the morning after.
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