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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo — Pic-k- Perfect Pg-1
Published: 2007-05-12 08:27:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 4490; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 8
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Soooo... I decided to be kind wit' ya cuties and CG the next page! XD Bet 'cha didn't see that coming(so quickly at least...)!!How are the BG's? I don't do BG's often(if ya hadn't already noticed...) so I tried really hard on these ones! I hope they look okay!! ^^
Cover: [link]
Prologue-
Page One: [link]
Page Two: Not yet darilings'
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Comments: 32
MAY 12? Wow, man, you gotta update I wanna see THE REST of the comic lol
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Uh...yeah lol. This looks like a good beggining or however you spell it. Why stop here? It really would be a big hit.
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Aww
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Oh! It's so cute. I love your coloring style, and especially on the eyes. I've never read any SasuHina story started out like this before. I love it! Please please continue! >_<
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Okay, okay, I'll update as soon as I can
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Yay! Thanks so much. ^_^
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EEK Angry Hinata! *hides*
GOOD JOB! *nice guy pose*
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Idea 9/10(Nice):
The story seems to be going in an good direction.
Look 7/10(not my style xD):
The colors could use alittle less effects but if its your style then its ok.
The shower should have more watter running since the fog(or whatever) is seen.
You have placed the pics good so it one pic doesnt give you an hint on what happens next.
Overall:
Overall it looks pretty good there is nothin that is too bad or too good for me xD, every mistake can be easily fixed...
So for that i think that i can surely give you an rating of 8/10 ^^
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Sugoi
...now if only I could access the file
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lol, your welcome ^^
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woah, Hinata's mad XD
like the BG. very nice!!!! ^_____^
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heheheh.....no love for Sasuke besides his Emo-duck hair fans.......kukukukukukkuuk
~LipSmacker~
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I like it so far! ^^ I wanna see more! (My doujinshi isn't coming along very quickly.
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haha. I dont even have the time to color my doujinshi
its good. I love backgrounds, but I hate doing them
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Lol, X3 I hate doing 'em too, and I can never tell where to put them, sometimes you can getaway with no Bg and sometimes you can't... it gets so confusing! @.@
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I know! I love it when you can get away with it
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the background dont look bad at all! looking foreward to more pages soon!
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what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing what thing
tell me now tell me tell tell me tell me tell me tell me tell me tell
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sorry great work
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