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Published: 2011-10-27 10:08:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description You have just come into my life
And it is life that seemed to take you,
When you were still and lifeless
I did not know what to do,

I cradled you in my arms
In an attempt to have you again,
Hoping it would be enough to bring you back
So I would not suffer this pain,

Your small body I held
For several hours on end,
Thinking the love for you I possessed
Was enough for your life to mend,

I settled you down to rest
For all hope seemed lost,
It was then that I realised, how much
A taken life does cost,

I wept for you deeply
As I knew what was to come,
You were to be replaced the day after next
With someone whose mind was numb,

I have bonded with you closely
My soul as one with yours,
I did not know what went wrong
For your death, what was the cause?

I placed you gently under my light
So I could see you closely,
I could not believe you were truly gone
And I could not give up hopelessly,

To my most joyful surprise
Life had returned to your soul,
I could live hopefully again
Death had not taken its toll,

You thrive off the light now
It is your only way to live,
So as much light as you ever need
I will selflessly give,

I can not lose you again
Not after what had happened before,
You are my closest friend
And will be forever more.
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Comments: 12

blue-eyed-bee [2011-10-29 03:21:58 +0000 UTC]

it reminds me of my pet rat jimmy :<

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killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:18:57 +0000 UTC]

I don't know who it's about... but it gave me goosebumps. It's powerful. Great job.

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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Will you change your opinion when you know who it's about?

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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Brilliant writing is brilliant writing. I'll still love it, and friend-luffles will still be given to you~

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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Alright, it was written about my calculator.
When I bought it, it didn't work but I had already created a bond with it. Mum wanted to return it for a new one but I didn't want to.
When I put it under my lamp, it turned on because it has a dual power system, which made me realise it still worked.
That made me happy.

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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:42:26 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome! See? Genuis!
I understand: you love your calculators, and you're entitled to that. I love my lava lamp, my piano and my beanbag...despite the fact that I just realised how nerdy and old-fashioned that just made me sound...

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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:48:57 +0000 UTC]

I form an emotional bond with just about anything that isn't alive.
It makes it unbelievably hard to throw away useless things T^T

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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:56:40 +0000 UTC]

That's because they can't hurt you, right?
It would. I find things that people have given to me the hardest to throw away.

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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:59:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure. I think that everything has a soul.
People say that man made things don't really mean a lot, what about humans?

They are. Mum wanted me to throw away old Christmas cards I got from my friends and I just couldn't.

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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 12:12:18 +0000 UTC]

That's true.
Yeah. They're special to me. Why would I wanna throw them away?
Sorry about the long time between replies: the internet connection decided to die on me. My English draft's all typed out now, though!

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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 12:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

I haven't started my English draft D:

My internet does that too, it's all good ^^

Say are you familiar with the flash comic Knite?
It is amazing.
[link]

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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 12:31:46 +0000 UTC]

No, but I shall check it out...

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