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Published: 2011-10-27 10:01:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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My world is so dark,No light can come in,
My sorrows have drowned my life,
Making it hard to breathe,
To laugh and to smile,
They are but a dream to me,
Each strike hurts,
Each more than the last,
My love is ripped from my heart,
Leaving a wide open gap,
That burns so painfully,
As the air of my cold, dark world
Gently strokes the wound,
My tears are always there,
Running down my cheeks,
Making no sound
As they drip from my face
Into oblivion,
I wish my love could still exist,
Within your eyes,
But you have been stolen,
Leaving this aching wound
Reaching out for your soul
That no longer exists
In this world,
You are but an echo,
In my heart, and my mind,
Bringing tears to my eyes,
As you make yourself known,
Only I feel this pain,
This pain of loss,
Oh how I wish
I could go into oblivion.
Comments: 11
killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:20:12 +0000 UTC]
I shall fave them all because they are wonderful!!! And no, I'm not just being nice: I'm serious. I love your poetry, and as for this verse, I love it.
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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:22:41 +0000 UTC]
You love my writing, I love yours ^_~
Seems we're equal
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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha. Yeah, seems so~ After all, we both might be Professor Xavier...
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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Wait... maybe you haven't read that other message yet... Trust me, it's not something completely wrong or creepy... I think...
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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:52:00 +0000 UTC]
Matt says you are Xavier?
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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 10:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, because he's Batman and apparently I'm smart.
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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 10:55:33 +0000 UTC]
xD
Interesting conclusion.
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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 12:14:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't know how he came to it, but I'm not arguing, since X-Men is my favourite Western comic~
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Flutter1994 In reply to killerqueen40 [2011-10-27 12:19:19 +0000 UTC]
It is all good when things work in your favour
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killerqueen40 In reply to Flutter1994 [2011-10-27 12:27:43 +0000 UTC]
Yup~ C'est tout bon, mon ami~
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