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Published: 2014-01-03 06:34:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2166; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 14
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This is the front, of the character Flutterbat!
I've made this, because I'm working on a animation project for Flutterbat!
Vector.
Flutterbat/Flutterflyraptor
Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.
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Comments: 11
pokemonmasterdiego [2014-01-03 08:45:52 +0000 UTC]
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As a Fluttershy fan, I would rate this a perfect score. But there are some features I would criticize.
Her eyebrows are bushier than her episode appearance. I suggest thinning it a bit, but the lashes are quite fair enough for me to judge as average. Her mane and tail are more like a cracked or dried kind, and it's much better when it's frizzier or like the episode. I would criticize most of all, clarify me if I'm blind, is that I don't see her bat wings at all. Sure this is your art or maybe your first try making Flutterbat, but try practicing more and study the her bat appearance in the episode. Try re-watching "Bat!" so you could have an idea or have a comparison to do better.
To sum up, I would rate 7 out of 10.
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Flutterflyraptor In reply to pokemonmasterdiego [2014-01-03 08:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you pokemonmasterdiego, for your honest critique!
It's hard for me to do, only because Fluttershy hardly comes out of the shadows, and when she does, she only flies?
They didn't show much of her front!
I did do better in the first vector of, Flutterbat!
This one, I'm going to work on it!
Again thank you, for your honest critique!
You have a, great day!
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pokemonmasterdiego In reply to Flutterflyraptor [2014-01-03 09:58:30 +0000 UTC]
It's a pleasure to judge, criticize and suggest, you pony artist. I'll be looking forward for more of your future arts for me to see. And also, have great day and may Celestia watch over
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pokemonmasterdiego In reply to Akumu2200 [2014-01-03 08:46:28 +0000 UTC]
I agree! ! <3 Fluttershy!
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